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meters 5 100.00%
brutalizer 0 0%
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Old 12-05-03, 01:26 AM   #1
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brutalizer vs. meters

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Old 12-05-03, 01:54 AM   #2
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shit wtf u want me to go..............................
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Old 12-05-03, 02:09 AM   #3
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u rhyme in meters the dick ryders vote in feet...........
sorry son just have a seat in this battle there a goal u have to meet.............
this rhyme no one will be able to reach ya in this ur the student and im a teacha........
welcome to the brutalizer featcha..........
shit this guy dosent even kno how to type his shit is dull and ripe............
my name is brutalizer see i dont think u should have accepted my challenge g..........
sorry man this rhyme is over lets see who the dick ryders vote over............
 
Old 12-05-03, 02:23 AM   #4
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My rhymes a pendulum to shatter ya ridiculous flow like a story by Poe/
Cat's like, "you mean there's an object that travels to and fro OTHER than my dildo!?!?"

Cat's ammassed 59 votes, as far as any battles?: he's just plain passed/
He actually thinks that when he spits he's real ill? I think he's just throwin' up 'cause he's trashed/

Pound for pound this herb is cashed, my punches landing like they laser guided/
This n00b didn't know the rules of RB so i told him he was supposed to lose: ....stupid bitch abided/

I'm like a cocaine smuggler the way I deal this whips CRACK/
Little poser bitch wants to turn back? now you know what it's REALLY like to be black/

When i merked you? i lost track, probably somewhere near bar numba two/
Just to add insult to injury, cracked ya in the temple becuz I wanted to jew
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Old 12-05-03, 02:43 AM   #5
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will someone vote on this
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Old 12-05-03, 03:37 AM   #6
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im givin it to meters........better flow, wordplay etc....he just used more creativity while brut's rhyme was too much on the basic side...no beef just my opinion.....

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...46&pagenumber=2
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Old 12-05-03, 03:44 AM   #7
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personal-brut
punches-meters
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creativity-meters
flow-meters
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overall-meters

hmmph..brut u could of taken him.. just addd some punces and wordplay and u'll be ok for a while.. keep up the improving dawg elevate some..

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Old 12-05-03, 03:45 AM   #8
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can ya'll return the fave and post an honest vote on my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...3246#post963246
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Old 12-05-03, 04:08 AM   #9
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LMAO uh meters got this pretty easily. He had better flow, punches, wordplay. Brute again our disses are aight but try to use more personals and don't end your rhyme without a rhyme..LOL yo Meters hit this up with an honest votehttp://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?threadid=96628

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Old 12-05-03, 04:09 AM   #10
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my bad
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Old 12-06-03, 01:08 AM   #11
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Upping!!
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Old 12-06-03, 01:14 AM   #12
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meters go the flow, structure, closr, opner, punches, metas, n wordplay n he ripped this kid............................................... ..
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Old 12-06-03, 01:14 AM   #13
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ill poll my vote when i reach 100 posts yo can yall vote on the battles in my sig bein slept on...............................................
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Old 12-06-03, 12:15 PM   #14
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upping....
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Old 12-06-03, 12:24 PM   #15
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Battle was ehh.

Brute's verse was too simple. Structure and wordplay need some work. Decent opener, and if tha verse kept up like it started, he would have had this.

Meters had an ok verse, a lil' on the wack side cuz-a vocab (ex: to and fro) but overall a...better verse.

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