FIRST VERSE

The life of me is some times drastic…and hectic but I last it.
But the fact is, that pain is stronger and the heartache comes harder.
My goal stretches further…most of the times I think of why I bother.
I’m shy around the ladies, but talkative with my friends.
Will this ever end…or will this trouble I have put it self to mend.
Sometimes I ask myself if im good enough in looks to live.
Can I give…myself the second chance and let my conscience win.
I’m always thinking that my friends don’t like me for who I am.
I cant talk to know one cause it seems they don’t give a dam.
I try not to show it by making jokes…but its different at home.
I just sit and write about life and its movements in which I roam.

CHORUS
Pain and suffering again as the days get bad and full of catastrophe.
Too much strife ya see…I’m not playing around this is the…life of me.
Im still fighting see…cuz im not playing aroung this is the…life of me.

SECOND VERSE

I sometimes wish I was born smart…I hate being a failure.
I wanna get rid of the bad days and to not remember.
All that happens to me, its like my lifes cursed but its not all bad.
But im glad…that a friend to be there is, what I now had.
But now lifes getting better its changing into something great.
I haven’t yet found a soul mate…but for that special day that I wait.
I don’t want to grow up quickly I want my young days to slow down.
So I can appreciate the good days I’ve found…im no longer bound.
A while before my nights would last forever…id lie tryin to fall asleep.
These words are deep…im unique cause the truth is what I speak.
But whats the difference between the naturally gifted and the ones who try.
That’s the story of why…its not as easy to live my life.

CHORUS
Pain and suffering again as the days get bad and full of catastrophe.
Too much strife ya see…I’m not playing around this is the…life of me.
Im still fighting see…cuz im not playing aroung this is the…life of me.


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Open Mics I Replied To

My voice within..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9392#post969392

da death..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9404#post969404

my team..
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9423#post969423

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Cool

^^LOL i bet ull get banned for that
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but yeh

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This was a pretty good piece i thought....your structure was good in this, i liked that...you had some good multies in this, i liked those as well lol....flow in this was pretty good i thought, you stayed on point through out it....your chorus was good also...overall good piece...keep at it.

Why Would I get Banned for that ???????

Opps My Bad I'll Fix It

u wont get banned unless someone tells a admin about u....but i wont do that

upping Pz

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well i though that was a good decent Read......i liked ya flow it stayed on Target the hole way through....the chorus was tight.......the structure was good your lines werent to long or too short..Nice topic ti was a godd one...Multies were there that good not enough in the open mis these day........allround it was about 9/10 Keep that shit Droping Kuz
Could ya return the favour aiight Peace

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well i liked it if i were to rate it i would give it

8.7 of 10


overall nice piece


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Dope piece dawg...Your flow was solid , your structure was nice....The chorus was dope , your verses were on point with the tittle of this piece...The concept was really creative , your lines werent stretched...And you had a nice content...So overall I give this piece an 8/10...

Hot Shyt kid!!......i liked this piece Flowz good,the verses made sense...(on point)....dat made it even better!!...good meaning to it!!....da only thing i can really say is keep elevatin!!.....Good Job!....~1~

nice peice dawg keep up the good work.. i think that you had great structure and some good creativit.keep it up. 7.5/10