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spit now.....check in asap.
verse due in 15 minutes or so
no recycling
no c,h, dr votes

checking in............
peace

check in man..............
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shit u say i cant step up on the mike u anit nothing but a dike, it anit a pretty sight when im done with a fight, i think everyone will say right right ,u cant roll with me i roll with jay-z, and call all the girls my baby,u suck u cant fuck cause u lost ur luck, u say i cant get up on the mike u would be a virgin if it wasint for ur right hand. last time i say u u were fuckin with ur man stan.

This is nervous steppin, all about the rap? G can't even check in
Look at him handle his weapon, Mouthin off witout protection
V make you eat ya teeth, so you can spit strong wen you speak
Me Great you meet defeet, punches hit long kinda like'a week
No experience what so ever, no contest here i'm just so clever
Win this battle? you'll never, i'm genuine you fake like Pleather
put Pac in ya name ta build fears, youz a broken clutch you can't catch gears,
So lemme honer you name and make'a Memorial outta ya net carreer
I bet you queer, so i don't let you near, puncture ya chest wit spears
Is like I Flunked ya in tests for years, takin' you ta school despite your tears

visine ripped the kid it wus a true merkin but both yall is noob the battle wus weak but pac or wutever the wananbe is he whack as shit his nly good line wus the right hand thing and that shit is so played out and old no one thinks its funny anymore
My VOte-VisinE drop a honest vote on the battle(s) in my sig...
ThanX
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this was a mediocre battle..but visinE clearly ripped the
other kid a new asshole...betta disses..decent but played punches..up ya skills man...

the other cat was garbage.............................

vote v!

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VisinE won this battle clearly.

rap....... ya verse was wack, simple rhymes and shit need ta elevate, but still good for a newb

my vote goes to visinE cause he had better flow rhyme and better bars

vote on this battle " Remixed Illusion vs Tribal"
and "Remixed Illusion vs 1st to wreck"

honest votez and don forget ta poll vote

pz

^nuff sed.............definitley

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METAPHORES - visinE
VOCABULARY - visinE
PUNCHLINES - visinE
STRUCTURE - visinE
CREATIVITY - visinE
PERSONALS - visinE
OPENING - visinE
CLOSING - visinE
MULTIES - visinE
FLOW - visinE

OVERALL - visinE

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Horrible Battle Very weak!!

But fucc it!!......

rap:u succ jus face it horrible verse needs alot of elevatin!!.......not much more to say!!

shit u say i cant step up on the mike u anit nothing but a dike, it anit a pretty sight when im done with a fight, i think everyone will say right right ,u cant roll with me i roll with jay-z, and call all the girls my baby,u suck u cant fuck cause u lost ur luck, u say i cant get up on the mike u would be a virgin if it wasint for ur right hand. last time i say u u were fuckin with ur man stan

^^ i dont even know what da fucc u call dis!!

u would be a virgin if it wasint for ur right hand.<<< dat wus bitten!!.....he should be banned for dat n for bein whacc!!

Now.......

Visine:for a newb shyt wus good keep it up!!....verse wasnt bad shoulda been better but fucc it it really didnt need too,u still won da battle!!

So lemme honer you name and make'a Memorial outta ya net carreer

^^ i think dats da best line!!

Vote:Visine

Reason:dont even need 1!!

ON3

Personals- Visine
Punches- Visine
Multies-Visine
Flow- Visine
Vocab- Visine
Wordplay- Visine
Overall- Visine

Synapsis- Ummmmmmmmmmmmm... Yea... LoL

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