5-6 bars (10-12 lines)

no crew......hate.......d/r.......chain votes

no voting for someone just cuz they voted for u
explain all votes

check in playa....and u can set a deadline or whatever

i'll be back to vote...can you drop honest one here please


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97210


thanx..late

checkin....both verses are due December 9th, 2003 by midnight eastern time....we can drop before that time...but any later and it will be DQ for either of us....

peace
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thats cool mine will be dropped well before than


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i will drop after b-ball practice

36 battles...but ya record says u only battled 2 vets...
u well known???..
..e-dubbs aint even on the map yet....
ya dislexic and murdered ya cat but ya still not an insane killer....
call u hoe-hoe cuz ya spits are nothin but filler..
all those wins...... and u still cant get in elite...
thats what happens when u battle a vet...u get ya ass beat...
them wins are all from newbies they dont mean shit...
ya whack...even ya toothbrush hates ya spits...
damn its like whackness jumped up and attacked ya....
cuz in this battle...
..hes comin up short of breath..like fat kids wit asthma...
mike jackson is his idol cuz when he feels lonely he just beats it...
u were born...
..thats proof a condom is never around when u need it...

aight i'll be dropping in a bit............................................... .................................................

peace
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Don't Understand Personals Or Wordplay, Don't Vote...Every Line Has It..Catch It!!!!

I Got On AIM And Told Him Fuck U, And Started An Approach For Cyber..
I Don't Know What's Worse, Me Losing To 2 Vets Or U Losing To 5 Herbs..
His Custom Title Told Me To "Feed Off This" So I Brought His Girl With Me..
Ur Barely Up In Rank, Ur To The 'Left Of Z' So I Ask 'Y' Are U 'Shifty'..(keyboard)
I'm Sorry To Be The One To Break This , But Ur Ghostwriter's Aisle 5..
Take This Girls Period Remove The O, Rearranged And Realised U Had LICE..(e.coli)
How Can U Be The Winner, When In Ur Sig U Don't Even Know How To Center..
This Kid Is Gettin Hit In The Ass More Than A Legless Man's Fender..
I Told Him What's Up Dog, And He Immediately Asked For A Kennel..
Ha, This Kid's Reppin A Crew That Praises Prince Just A Card As The Symbol..
If This Kid's Rhymes Were Crossdressers, They Would Still Never Change..
U Would'a Saved Some Embarassment With Ur Verse As Ur Location...Blank..

peace
4:20

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nice battle props to both....

this is my break down...e.coli you had some nice flow...you had some hard punches mixed in wit some nice creativity...

damn its like whackness jumped up and attacked ya....
cuz in this battle...
..hes comin up short of breath..like fat kids wit asthma...

i thought that was a killa line...

call u hoe-hoe cuz ya spits are nothin but filler..

i thought that went down well...i think you came hard with some nice punches...some litte action on the personals...the structure was ok...i admire your style...

smoke, i know holds i nice record...i can see why...you came back hard..you had some crazy ass personals...the punchlines and creativity was awesome...enjoyment plus...

Ur Barely Up In Rank, Ur To The 'Left Of Z' So I Ask 'Y' Are U 'Shifty'..(keyboard)

that was a killer line...good to see the use of the mind there...

i have say props to both, but smoka brought the pain on this, his structure and flow was awesome....

vote=smoka good battle and props to both...

could you plz drop a vote on my battle on the link below and vote honestly..
its gettin slept on...cheers

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...81&pagenumber=1

^^done....uppin #1......*remembers y i don't like battling in the elevated*....damn...this battle won't be over until next week most likely....lmao...

peace
4:20

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opener:smoka
closer:smoka
punches:smoka
structure:smoka
vocab:tie
wordplaye.coli:
overall:smoka

smoka won this hands down, ecoli, ur shit was wackly structured.

aiight

please vote for the battle in my sig ::VS:: johnnywattz
its gettin slept on

aiight

peace

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^^i'll check the battle.....but i even think it was closer than the way u put it...lol...but if that's ur opinion....lol...it's coo...nice battle e.coli...

peace
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nah it was closer than i put it, ou hit harder with your opener, closer an punches, that takes up the bulk of things.

it was a very close battle, his structure ,ad lees harde hitting punches won it.

i aint tryin to cause no hate.

peace

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yo this was a good battle. Oh - and yall return the favor and vote on my shit with Da_Legend since you know shit sleeps in elevated....


here's that breakdown:

Opener: smoka (close)
Punches: smoka (close though e.coli had more, but smokas hit harder)
Originality: tie
Personals: e.coli
Closer: e.coli
Best Punch: smoka "I Got On AIM And Told Him Fuck U, And Started An Approach For Cyber..
I Don't Know What's Worse, Me Losing To 2 Vets Or U Losing To 5 Herbs.."

Vote = smoka

good battle yall

vote on my shit

yep.........thanks to everyone who voted..........

uppin(1)

lets get this closed

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opener:smoka
closer:smoka
punches:smoka
perosnal:Tie
structure:smoka
vocab:tie
wordplay:e.coli
overall:smoka

WoW this was a great battle.. i enjoyed reading both verses.. but i was feeling Smokajoka's verse better.. very good wordplay and persona.. e.Coli.. you had some pretty good landing punches and personal but smoka had a mixture of everything....No hate.props to both
GREAT BATTLE

Overall:Smoka

PZ