10 lines u spit first

this kid isint comein so ill spit my shit so all u can vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

u say i cant spit ur flow is shit hoe
each time u c a guy ur like get low get low get low oh oh oh
and once u hear my shit ull wanna rap like my shit bitch
last time i saw u u were fuckin with lilo and stich
and then dont forget richey rich ur main bitch
with ur 3 some mitch
ur a bitch i heard u paid rich to suck ur dick
but all that bitch did was lick
so dont give me ur shit
ur goin to lose this battle even if u had a dick

its pretty week i know but im a newb

Yo kid, you suck dudes dicks like that girl in your pic//
Probably Tu Pac'z cuz UNLIKE you, his ryhmes are ill and sic// (o0o0o0o0o0o0oh)
Your from rapid city? is that place even existing?//
If so, how many other faggots are in the phone book listings//(like you)
You were born in a highway (where most accidents happen)//
Your also mentally retarded (thinkin you rappin')//
iite fuck this I'm done.... you blow anyway//
Drop ya verse quick... even if (like you) it's gay//

iite..i thought i was posting first so my first line really doesnt too well but fuck it................................................ .................................................. ...............

ight now vote!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

punches - looney
flow - looney
enjoyment - looney
metas- looney
multis-looney
it's pretty much all looney here. rapg, you'll get there, but looney is ahead of your game by a lot. no hatin' or d/r, just my 2 cents. vote: looney

yea dogg still got a ways to go!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!11

i got to say looney...

rap, it seems you was kinda off... keep liftin. i ain't a GOD so take it how you want it. Just throwin in my two cents...

VOTE: Looney
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da blakest nigga dis side of da moon.
Blak Woods
-The Peasantry-



Get Aktive Nigga...
-blakout-

oh yea peeps


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da blakest nigga dis side of da moon.
Blak Woods
-The Peasantry-



Get Aktive Nigga...
-blakout-

it was a ok battle kept it clean

flow L
wordplay L
vocab L
structure rap
punches L

over all vote Loonie

my vote goes to looney

flow
vocab
structure all go to loooney dont worry rap ull get better.

hit these up thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=3

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=3

yo gazeebo ur links dont work on my broswer for some reason can ya re write them or sumthin.....


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if i could vote id vote loony he did a little bit better............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ........................................