OTHER POECTIC SCRIPTS WHICH I HAVE CHECKED OUT. BE SURE TO LOOK AT THE LAST ONE. REAL TIGHT.

BLYNDED SOUL:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97689

DEE EYE DOUBLEZ WHY:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96952

LIBA DEE:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97054


DAVID vs GOLIATH

IVE BEEN BEEFIN ON THE NET RECENTLY BUT THIS RAPS CUMIN FROM THE HEART/
IM GONNA TELL IT HOW LIFE IS ROUND FAILSWORTH TO THE END FROM THE START/
IM WRITIN THIS IN COLLEGE WHILE GETTING SCHOLARS AND GETTING PAID/
MEANWHILE ONE OF MY OLD BOYS IS GETTING CONCLUDED WITH A BLADE/
HE GOT STABBED IN THE HEART FOR NOT PAYIN FOR 10 QUID TICK ON SKUNK/
SO THE DEALER DECIDED THAT WAS A GOOD REASON TO KILL – WOT A PUNK/
WE ALL KNEW THE MURDER, HE WAS MY OLD BEST MATE FROM HIGH SKOOL/
I FUCKED HIM OFF A COUPLE OF YEAR AGO, HE STARTED ACTIN THE FOOL/
IF THERE IS ONE, THE FUNNY THING IS THAT IT HAPPENED ON 9/11
I AINT RELIGIOUS BUT GOD I HOPE THAT GUYS IN HEAVEN/
YOU KNOW, WHILE IM SAT HERE IN COLLEGE I COULD ALSO GET KILLED/
COZ THAT’S WHERE HER WAS, LEARNIN TO BECOME A BUILD-/
HER, HIM, ANY OF THESE PRICKS CUD KILL ME IF I SLACK FOR A SECOND/
BUT THEY'D END UP IN THE PEN, WUD THERE MOTIVES BE QUESTIONED?/
WAS IT OVER DRUGS, LAUGHS OR JUST FOR FUCKIN THEIR HOES?/
NO USE ASKIN ANYONE BUT THE FUCKIN KILLER, ONLY HE KNOWS/
I GOT BEEF AGAINST THE WORLD COZ THERES THINGS ‘N’ PEOPLE I’VE LOST/
TO REWIND TIME N DEAL WITH SHIT BETTER – HOW MUCH WUD IT COST?/
I WISH I CUD AV ANOTHER CHANCE OF PLAYIN LIFE DIFFERENTLY/
THE ONLY THING I ACHIEVED IS STAYIN OUT OF THE PENETENTARY/
JUST LIKE PAC I SEE NO CHANGES AND ITS ME AGAINST THE WORLD/
BUT UNLIKE BIGGIE I THINK MORE MONEY MORE PROBLEMS IS OBSERD/
SO ITS ME AGAINST THE WORLD, DAVID AGAINST GOLIATH/
AND AGAIN THE SMALLER FORCE IS GOIN TO TRIUMPH/
COZ I WONT LET THIS PLACE GET ME DOWN, ILL JUST DRINK HEAVILY/
AT THE END OF THE NITE - FALL INTO MY HOUSE, CAUSE STRESS MY FAMILY/
THAT’S OK THO COZ MY STEP DADDYS ALREADY DUN THAT/
FUCKED OFF LAST CHRISTMAS, LEFT NO MONEY, ACTIN THE TWAT/
AND NOW HE GOT A NEW WOMAN, ANOTHER SLAG TO SHAG IN HIS LIFE/
SO HE CAME ROUND TO TELL MY MOMMA AND CAUSE MORE STRIFE/
SHE'S THE SISTER OF A WOMAN WHO HAD AN AFFAIR WITH MY BIRTH FATHER/
HE DIED WHEN I WAS 1, HEART ATTACK, BUT THERES NO OTHER WAY I’D RATHER/
HAVE MY LIFE COZ I GOT MY MOM, BROTHER N SISTER OUT OF IT/
SOME PEOPLE WANNA DIE BUT COZ OF FAMILY I WANT THE OPPOSITE/
ME AND MY BROTHER ARE TIGHT LIKE STARSKY AND HUTCH/
WE SLING AND PARTY A LOT, NEVER BEEF TOO MUCH/
HE NEARLY DIED FROM CRUPE WHEN I WAS NEARLY THREE/
NOW WHENEVER I’M IN TROUBLE, HE BE THERE FOR ME/
MY MOM WAS BORN WITH 1 KIDNEY AND IT GOT INFECTED/
2 THIRDS HAD TO BE DETATCHED WHEN A SIST WAS DETECTED/
MY SISTER AINT MY FULL, ONLY HALF FROM MY MOMS SIDE/
BUT SHE MIGHT AS WELL BE, THAT’S HOW IT FEEL INSIDE/
SHE AS CUTE AS CAN, WANTS TO BE A DANCING STAR/
AND LIKE THE SUN, I KNOW SHE GONNA BE THE BIGGEST BY FAR/
FUCK SITTIN BACK ON LIFE,CUM OUT ALL GUNS BLAZIN/
COZ I CAN’T BE TO SYNICAL ABOUT MY RAISIN/
MY MAMMAS BEEN LIKE A PILLAR, THERE AS MY SUPPORT/
WHEN I WAS PLAYIN UP AT SKOOL N GOT PUT ON REPORT/
AND WHEN I GOT SUSPENDED FOR FIGHTIN IN THE HALLWAY/
SHE SHOWN ME THE LIGHT HOPING THAT I WOULDN’T GO ASTRAY/
SUPPOSE ITS TOO LATE FOR THAT COZ I ALREADY FUCKED UP IN COLLEGE/
FAILED LAST YEAR, GOTTA STAY ANOTHER TWO, TRY TO EXPAND MY KNOWLEDGE/
IM JUST CHILLIN HERE, WRITIN LYRICS WITH MY HOMMIES AND THE GIRLS/
BUT MY HEAD IS SPININ AND I CANT THINK OF ANY WORDS FOR THIS VERSE/
COZ MY MINDS GOIN CLOUDY AND NOTHINGS REALLY CLEAR/
WHATS GOIN ON IN MY MIND AINT WHAT I SHOW ON THE EXTER-IOR/
COZ I GOTTA KEEP MY HEAD UP N KEEP MY MIND SAIN/
SO MY LIL’ SIS FINKS EVERYFINS OK – SHE DON’T NEED NO PAIN/
NEITHER DO I, INFACT, NON OF Y’ALL MUTHA FUCKERS NEED IT/
SO WHY DON’T WE STOP MERCYLESS KILLINGS – AND JUST FUCKIN LEAVE IT/
AND IM SICK OF SEEIN TEENAGE BEAUTIES GETTING LEFT WITH KIDS/
USE A FUCKIN JOONY, GET AN ABORTION OR JUST FLICK UR OWN CLITS/
JUST DON’T GO HAVIN SEX, HAVIN KIDS AND GIVIN THEM A SHIT TIME/
EVERY NIGHT, TUCK EM IN BED, READ THEM A LIL’ STORY AND SING EM A RHYME/
SO IM GONNA SPIT U 1 LAST LINE TO THINK ABOUT LIFE/
CHILL, RELAX, AV PEACE AND STOP LIVIN BY THE GUN N KNIFE/

YO YO, THIS IS A REAL LENGTHY READ BUT IM KEEPIN IT REAL HERE. THINK ITS WORTH IT.

JUST LOOKIN FOR SOME FEEDBACK TO SEE IF PEOPLE ARE FEELIN THIS KIND OF POETRY. REMEMBER AS EMCEES WE ALL POETS.

PEACE OUT

NYBODY READIN THIS OR WHAT. GIVE ME FEEDBACK PLAYERS...........................

WORD...
I FEEL YA IN THIS PIECE
KINDA LONG THOUGH
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