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Old 12-10-03, 10:06 PM   #1
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"Guess Whos Back" (Violence Track - FUCKIN SICK!! - MY BEST - DOWNLOAD!)

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Word.. New Track.. Shits Sick... better Flow And Delivery..... Beat Is Sickness... Produced By Wyshmaster.. Ill Rhyme Scheme To... Def Worth Checkin..


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Old 12-10-03, 10:09 PM   #2
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the only only thing i can say...is work on the enunciation...

some words .. you dont slur...but you say them wierd....

good shit

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Old 12-10-03, 10:17 PM   #3
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damn this is fire homie..... n i peeped ur lp... dope also...
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Old 12-10-03, 11:26 PM   #4
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the only only thing i can say...is work on the enunciation...

some words .. you dont slur...but you say them wierd....

good shit

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that was the whole point... shit sounds dope on certain parts
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Old 12-11-03, 12:55 AM   #5
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sorry didnt know you was going for unclear enunciation at some points
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Old 12-11-03, 07:09 AM   #6
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yup..

the style like that makes it sound iller... and its clear as fuck just sounds a lil different.. i just ran the words together
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Old 12-11-03, 08:50 AM   #7
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simple and plain its good
keep elavating and get signed up for a record deal
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Old 12-11-03, 10:35 AM   #8
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nothing new, very common style.. i mean, it's a good style, but if you gonna do what he ^ said.. u gotta come with somethin' more unique.. u sound like classified/benefit/ every other white underground artist out there... u had sum nice multi's, good flow, so u do got skill, but work on another style... 1
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Old 12-11-03, 02:17 PM   #9
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it was an aiight track, you ot some good concepts there, you need to maybe switch ya style up and jus keep elevatin dawg, you can only get better!!!
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Old 12-11-03, 02:58 PM   #10
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lmfao..

i switched my style TO THIS.. for THIS BEAT... cus it fit dope...
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