Crew Battle
10 Lines
5 Votes
No KO's
No D/R
No Recycling
Due Tommorrow By Midnight
Check In. . .


THIS IS ORIGIN's VERSE
Amend was never to smart..why he always hated on Black Tie
Lost..even his clouded vision never elevated to black sky's
Noones feelin ya presents..so..amends resorted to wrappin (Presents=presence)
Amend gave birth to his wackness..n damn them lips flappin (Crew)
Only time ya dope is when ya mom pulls out the tree at xmas
Im straight destructive..look..even my record is wreckless
Amend neva bit the bullet..he ate it..afraid to spit first
Ya wackness gotta lil carried away..hands down inna herse
Amend's still a rookie..he'll never write with the prose (prose=style)
Ya feeback is negative..cus ya wackness is gettin exposed

Another Rule: No Feeding



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THIS IS AMEND'S VERSE


Things To Know
Quote Is Accurate^
Origin Is Mix'd*

Quote:

Originally posted by Origin lol^ i gotta homie offa a diff board i cud get here...hes already signed up just gotta get him active...his recs 100-2 ..ill suck his dick or sumtin to get him here lol

No Ands, Ifs, or Buts About It. . .Englands Wak - Foreign Fucks
& I Got Proof To Prove - With Your Own Words^...'Origin Sucks'
U Was Born A Bluff, Black/White.?, Im Gettin A Mixed Message
So I Wonder Whats Weaker, Ya Punches Or Skin Complextion
A Simple Lesson, Dont Be A Newb To 'Mend, But Too Late, It Is...
...I Cant Believe Im Battlin A Kid Who Still Has A Grave In His Sig
11 Nameless Wins.? U Should Be Idolized, For Newbs To Size Up
...And Truthfully, It'd Probably Look Alot Like Your Crews Line Up




& in 8.!

LMAO... Amend Posted In IR... And When I Updated The Polls... I Just Checked The Votes And Not The Verses... This Voting Is Skewed... All Votes Deleted... Get New Ones.

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wow........this battle is gonna still be here when bush is captured from a barn :|

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I Cant Help You Link This Battle To People On aIM Who D/R's Back & Forth
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what?...i speak to one of the people on aim who voted on this battle..and they wudnt d/r me cus i dont even kno them that well...the rest i never even spoke to before...

wateva..this shits not even gonna finish now

Well The Votes Were Erased For Obvious Reasons
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if i were registered i'd vote ammend for a better verse..........better punches and better personals.............
meta's - tie
structure - tie
.......opener/closer- both ammend......

good battle...............ammend won tho..............peace

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wordplay and structure was definitely even in this battle.....personals were good for both of you but amend edged this one out in my opinion....both of you are definitely skilled mc's but amend won this.......could you please drop an honest vote on the battle in my sig?

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lol. amend wins.
punches were better & harder hitting.
origin's were played. . like the presents one...i used that a year ago. .
amends verse was more direct hits & solid punches.

vote - amend