Ayyo, spittin heated verses that have kids leavin in herses,
Hex you for life on hallow's eve.. fuck screamin witch curses/
Mighty preach with intellect..fuck actin stupid when I spit./
Spray corrosive fluid when I sip.. the acidic shit that with one
hot line causes explosive reactions when they hit/
Leave kids commitin suicide.. I hand em tha rope cause I act lik they conscience/
Never guilty like dre and slim.slap you around till you sleep but think your consious/
That when mighty spit shit you betta be cautious.. of lethal side effects no kid could stop this/
So step up if you think your hot. so light the torch G/
Minister dope verses. till I'm aware you can scorch me/
Come at me hard, but Mighty create a verbal holocaust/
Cause spontanious human combustion..and have cats flesh meltin lik Hagen Daaz/
Murk cats with burnin sermons..disect ya brain and take polaroids of you twitchin and squermin/
Write to teach. so when emcee's listen to my shit. im sure that they learnin/
Fuck bitches doggy like snoop. so I prop up they back and hit they end up/
Slit your throat.. swallow your esophagus whole.. two weeks later driftin in tha lake is where you end up/
Devour your eyes..to memorize your every sight/
Cats be lik.might got dope flow.mighty got dope verses.. and hes white/
Not much a difference.. cause this aint jus a black art/
Get heated on a''track'' and pull a drive by in a go-cart/
That's tha way I act.. half of kids think I got a screw loose/
Can't dis-agree.. when I'm in full possesion of my soul. and sometimes I let it lose me/
Can't guaratee I won't pull back with tha oozi, pop two clips if you talk shit...So you can choose G/
Rep tha NJ. you beefin we gonna buck shit/
Think you fast dodge some bullets.. we pop at ya knee caps so you can't wak. and pop ya head so you can't duck shit/

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but this was ok, your structure needs work, your lines are stretched out....try making them a little shorter cause it takes away from the flow if they are stretched like that...you had some alright multies in this....overall this was ok...keep at it.

i was feeling it but thats prob cause we similar in style

Long but some good shit none the less.
flowed nice, vocab was alright
Keep doing ur thing

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Not good but it was aiight....ya need work on ya structure though..ya Flow was Good but ya seemed to stretch ya lines....try and keep ya Lines the Same length and ya will get betta Feedback Peace