POETRY BATTLE
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4-0 KO
first to 5

check in give me about 1 hr.. my shit not prewrittenn... I'll post your verse for you dude.. so its in the right place

___________________ACE KINGS VERSE________MOVED FROM BITCHSLAPPED TO THE REAL BATTLE PLACE______


Hot Hitz dawg i'm trying to save you/I don't wanna be da nigga to slay you/how do you have da nerve to ever try and diss/when your breath smells like a vat of fresh piss/I'm in da doctor's office sitting and waiting/operating on you with my rhymes like you my patient/I flow valiantly and ruthless/when I got head from you girl she was toothless/leaving her mouth open like a dentist/den suddenly you had jus came in/spitting your rhymes made me fainted/why you on whack city/while i'm on rap city/you the type dat kiss another man/needing your mama to hold you hand/i'm on another level like an elevator/I can't help it that you are my hater/I gave you 10 dollars to get something to eat/why da hell, you bought lotion to beat your meat/da little dick baby meat weiner/ya girl says it's smaller than her pinky finger/lets go get back to you/ saying you got da skill to rip dis dude/chances slim and probability ain't happening/I'm bout freestyle, your bout babbling/I can smell da whackness of your rhymes/while i'm on da internet, typing deez rhymes/nigga go and get some help/you didn't pass highschool, no wonder you failed/you stupid,whack fucking silly and dumb/looking like adult web site porno bums/I don't think you'll probably make it as a rapper/but you so fake you can play it out like an actor/stop your flows and shit/just settle down get ass and tits/you flow like a faucet with a plug in it/really, dawg I don't feel your shit/I heard your flow was on da radio poppin/I made sure to turn it of really quick without stoppin/I'll rip and come back again like Tupac/like R and B singers your to soft/nigga try and toughen up and get hard/come back on Ace King, who played his first card/I don't really think so/you scared you can't flow/I already know/about you hoe/dis jus da tip of my vocabulary iceberg/ next is gonna be a homicide, murder with words/on da real you suck/I listen, and say what da fuck/is dis garbage i'm hearing/get me a q-tip because my ears jus need clearing/from your lyrical nonsense/respect da game, Ace King, and da hotness/

Soon as niggas see you on an album cover/they see you fake as a mothafucka/my rap ain't ever being pre-written/I know what to say by my own inner descision/Your flow is fatally contagious like catching da flu/so horrible if I could see you, i'd spit on you/pitiful, ridiculous, retard spitting disses against Ace King!!/I'd fuck up your flow have you speaking cha-man-ching!!/sounded like a Chinese disciple as a Peter/I'm taking over all niggas trophies like Julius Caesar/You look like your ugly character icon/wuz wrong, my rhymes biting at you like pythons/of all rappers you fake like some Santa Clause/for you to be so whack with a probable cause/My poetry has did a fatality on you like mortal kombat/chopped up your brain, knees, and skull cracked/I rip you like Nas did to Jay- Z/if you think you betta, you crazy/If you were rated like American Idol/they would have to boo you and shoot you with da rifle/I wanna be like R. Kelly and jus rape your flow/what happened last night when your hoe had almost choked/you couldn't drop a hot rhyme if I was on an anchor/getting more cheese den Fort Knox gold bankers/your rap ain't no hip-hop/2 clips to your hip make it drop/dawg your rap should been shameless nothing worth ever claiming/Ace King pop bullets up in ya anus like you constipated/your whack like whack-a-moles/and I ate your mom out like guacamole/I can't help I get my dick blowed like a whistle/loud screams of speed like a pistol/I'll rub your rap out as an eraser/ an shake you off my nuts like a salt shaker/I deliver my rhymes like i'm Karl malone/tell ya mom's i'll hang up da phone/in da morning I woke on up/ya mom's was already on my left nut/I had nutted a tidal wave in her mouth/you hear da sound of da ocean crashing loud/dats not what should ever really happen/seeing your mom's lips chipping and cracking/I threw your ass and flicked you off/after you were gone I never was pissed off/lyrically you've been melted like a grilled cheese sandwhich/your rap is known worldwide for being banded/I hate to really show up at your funeral/but seeing you stop whack written rhymes was so damn beautiful/my bladder let loose a piss on your grave/to bad you was a fucking shame/instead of a well made custom casket/they lower you in a flower basket/I didn't want to smite or diss you/nigga quit and jus get a clue

what's wrong hot hitz/did you finally ever quit/I'll freeze your ass/ like cryogenics and stop you in your tracks/I've already done extinguished your flame twice/seems you got hit with Antartica winds and frozen ice/your passing like hot asses/your below temperature not even average/you need to retire like Michael Jordan/cause your game ain't affording/I read your whackness/so many times i've had it/I'm a dope mc/like weed,hay, and ecstacy/my mom always said face your fears/but hearing your rap is so damn weird/you put enough lyrical garbage on here for da dump truck to pick it up/dropping and putting it where ever it came from/you give me headaches by reading your lines/and it seems like you get worse every single time/ it took you this long to find out rap wasn't your deal/like monoply you landed on my house now it's your bill/I hit you like mike tyson/don't lost breath from fighting/your a child,boy, and so so/how da hell you gonna blast a fo fo/I get more asses than a donkey/even your mom's probably/nigga you've been to afraid/like a videogame it's already been played/you have no vital statistics/not even worth living/I flow and make da sea sway/I frosted your flame like frosted flakes/how you watching Barney getting hard/even eyeing niggas fresh out of prison yards/don't commit any suicide because un payed rent/bitch jump and die off a fence/like a videogame this battles been over/now I laugh at your ass like da Joker/my metaphors are better than yours'll ever be/write it, collaborate or burn it on a CD/I ripped you like a Christmas present gift wrap/you winning, i'm not ever standing for that/you a small dick faggot/getting turned down asking for asses/I've made snow/and icesickles on your not...so hot flow/quit man your jus a fucking joke/eating and reading your rhymes almost made me choke

vote for da Ace King.............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................ya heard main

vote soon..........................................Ace King.................................famous....... .................................................. .................hot.............................. ..gangsta......................................... ................street............................ .......................fuck you............................................... ..

I ripped his ass and he showed up, now what else needs to happen for me to win?.............................................. ................................. if someone reads dis battle make your votes and please read and answer da first question? thanks nigga!!!!!!!!!!................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....................................peace out

what verse am I battling ....... you WAK.. if you really want me to spit something then fucking say so,. I'll write and then post


and athen we can get some votes alright

then go ahead HOTZ BITCH......
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