Rules:

- 12 Line Max.

Both evrses due within a hour of now.. or you will be DQ'ed


Good luck chinpoko

checkkin in................................

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Iight............

Yo I Ain't battlin' you cause I demand the respect.....
Shit, if that were the case I'd throw hands witta Vet
Rupture ya chest, pull ya neck like rubberbands can stretch
Than I let go and I Bet, you fly far off this rap battle thread
you don't belong here herb why not just face the music?
you have talent as a janitor you should embrace and use it
A fake ass sellout like Judas, think ya good no1 can prove it
Grab that thought and remove it, Stabbed shot and suein
But you'll get nothin representin' ya self, i'm presentin' you help
descendin' ya health, make you look so bad you resentin' yaself
Like a turtle on it's back I leave you stuck on them shells
I Murda fags on this track and I beleive you fuckin' Juellz

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Check Tech's past history.... battlin vets its a mystery
Playin cricket is the only time you'll have the balls to hurt me physically
Verbal abuse, then ya head in a noose, all cause you thought you wouldn't lose?
Technician getting merked like canoes, thinkin you'd get away wit sparkin my fuse?
You not fittin in like opera singers doin rap battles
Light-Weight!, record obssed!, damn RB officially got more newbs than Ali got the rattles
Throw my own body parts at me, still couldn't hit wit personals
Record obvious wat he been eatin, smells like vaginial piercin tools


I wouldn't mind a re-match after this one...


pce

this was a pretty one sided battle in all fairness...
Breakdown--
Punches-Tech
Metas-Tech
Flow-Tech
Structure-Tech
Petrsonals-None..not enuf
Enjoyment-Techs
Vocab-B
Complexity-Tie
Sustainment-Tech
Overall-Tech

Fav Bar-Rupture ya chest, pull ya neck like rubberbands can stretch
Than I let go....I Bet, you fly far off this rap battle thread

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ...BEING SLEPT ON PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97780

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

uppin............................#1.////////////..................................
vote honestly ppl............................................... .................
good battle B.............................................

peace

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yea gotta agree wit Detained on this one
his breakdown pretty much says it all
honestly i thouhg kast woulda came harder than he did..
tech's verse wasnt his best but it edged out kast in this battle...

But you'll get nothin representin' ya self, i'm presentin' you help
descendin' ya health, make you look so bad you resentin' yaself


liked that one...

anyway
poll vote=tech

hit up the battle in my sig yall
thanx
out...

dam its not letting me poll for some reason...
get a mod or someone to poll my vote..

blah...


opener+1-Tech
closer+1-B
punches+2-Tech
personals+2-none
wordplay+1-neither
multis+1-T
originality+1-tie
complexity+1-B
cornyness-2-blah
enjoyment+1-T

overall.....B-Kast (+3).....Technician (+6)....winner..no hate at alll........please vote honestly here....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98207

Ye i agree with everyone else tech took it in almost every catagory.i would break it down but its gonna look the same as all the others...
if i could vote

-Technician

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BEST LINE FROM TECH

you don't belong here herb why not just face the music?
you have talent as a janitor you should embrace and use it

lmao, nice line tech

BREAKDOWN
flow-tech
structure-tech
punches- tech
multiz- tie
humor- tech by a little bit
wordplay- b
overall tech got this, i enjoyed this battle, too bad i cant poll vote=tech=vote

nice battle, *props*

BEST LINE FROM BKAST

You not fittin in like opera singers doin rap battles
Light-Weight!, record obssed!, damn RB officially got more newbs than Ali got the rattles

ite tech got this 1 with,

flow,
punches,
enjoyment,

good verse man.................good battle,

Whack Vote... Polls Set To 3-0.
-Axe

people need to poll vote Dayum....,,,,,,,,,,,,,uppn3

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Breakdown..

Punches - Tech
Personals - B kast
Multi's - Tech
Meta's - Tech
Wordplay - Tech
Flow - Tech
Creativity - B
Overall - Tech
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