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OpticalIllu$ion 0 0%
aPlyed 2 100.00%
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Old 12-12-03, 07:56 PM   #1
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OpticalIllu$ion...Vs...AplYed

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Aight homie...10 lines minimum..lets do this..you drop first
 
Old 12-12-03, 08:07 PM   #2
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ok...I did say blind spit...but if I must...here's a quick key
For all stupid newbs and morons who are going to vote
*-think about eh
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see ya..wait...you shouldn't even be here in God's eyes...that's Opt's fate
but your name starts with a low case....cuz me and ya mama forgot to Capitalize on mistakes!
no you ain't tight..I don't think your ass knows who you're facing
fuck last words...a's always last when he talks...like canadian conversations!*
Son I'm amazing, the deal is out, go ahead and scream and shout...
Cuz without doubt you a runner up...like taxi drivers on a scenic route!
aplyed a pimp? to get with a woman you'll need all the luck in the world
but if we subtracted the middle man....ap would finally be fuckin a girl!
 
Old 12-12-03, 08:34 PM   #3
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blah...just read front lines rule that each verse gotta be at least 10 lines...don't wanna get dq'd so I'll repaste this and add a bar
to the beginning to my verse

ap you keep digging...while I'm the one burying your loathing funeral...
Your not number 1...so don't confuse yourself with Roman Numerals!
see ya..wait...you shouldn't even be here in God's eyes...that's Opt's fate
but your name starts with a low case....cuz me and ya mama forgot to Capitalize on mistakes!
no you ain't tight..I don't think your ass knows who you're facing
fuck last words...a's always last when he talks...like canadian conversations!*
Son I'm amazing, the deal is out, go ahead and scream and shout...
Cuz without doubt you a runner up...like taxi drivers on a scenic route!
aplyed a pimp? to get with a woman you'll need all the luck in the world
but if we subtracted the middle man....ap would finally be fuckin a girl!
 
Old 12-12-03, 08:38 PM   #4
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ok...ok..not bad

Optical Illusions? Shit, i must be in a fuckin transexual's festival
cuz im battlin a person who claims to be a man but with no testicles.
Have a grudge against canadians, EH? Try and stop me
you couldnt be saved wit the help of three priests and jesus ridin on a donkey.
You try to pack pistols, Nigga all you pack is your lunch
and I be a serial killa, you be Cap'n Crunch (cereal)
I got a hunch, Breakfast dinner and lunch
Op Tried to KICK the SHIT Outta me but couldnt even deliver a punch.
these rhymes are the kind that make you go home and slit your wrists cuz they a pain in yo rectum
You've had yo 15 mins of fame now go get fucked over like Kobe's Victim
Ima give you the name "The Virgin Emcee"
Cuz God Chose you for his Second Son to Conceive
Too many Illusions Op, Where did me and your mother go wrong?
Cuz now you just about "CHittY ChaNg ChOng" The first nigga from hong kong...
you been served nigga by anotha spanish fly
But i guess you be the weakest link.........GOOD BYE!!!!
 
Old 12-12-03, 08:48 PM   #5
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Originally posted by aPlyed
Have a grudge against canadians, EH? Try and stop me


^^feeding.....


w/e votes...
 
Old 12-12-03, 08:50 PM   #6
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wasnt in the rules....so bun it....i posted rules in the first place homey...its all good.......................up...uppp.......
 
Old 12-12-03, 10:05 PM   #7
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vote on this you fuckers
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Old 12-12-03, 10:05 PM   #8
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homie aint no one votin in this battle......anyways min, tight battle .... good shit on you!!!!!...........
 
Old 12-12-03, 10:24 PM   #9
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good battle appyled took this fora newb ya both got potential just need to work on ya structure and sentence shortening but other than that vocab is there but opti. he needs to work on his metas and personals cause that's how you win battles both lacked some tin but overall flow applyed took it

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Old 12-12-03, 10:29 PM   #10
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respect dog but i aint no newB...been on the site b4 as Gizmo.......................so seen......................................
 
Old 12-12-03, 10:41 PM   #11
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This was a pretty good
battle because both of ya'll
meta's were good and
or flow was nice.

PEACE TO THE EAST
 
Old 12-12-03, 10:42 PM   #12
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^and your point is.........

generally people tend to say who they think won
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Old 12-13-03, 10:59 AM   #13
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come on people get this thing goin dun miss out............................................... .................................................. .................................................. ....................... seen
 
Old 12-13-03, 11:13 AM   #14
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Aiight..........

Opener-OI
Punch's-ap
Flow-ap
Structure-ap
Vocab-OI
Wordplay-ap
Closer-OI
Overall-ap

Vote:ap

It was a close battle but i feel ap got dis shyt as an overall verse!!........but like i said good battle from both of you jus elevate!!
 
Old 12-13-03, 11:29 AM   #15
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homey you states who won but forgot to vote min.....plz dun forget to vote thats what counts , seen.............................................. .........
 
 


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