Dawg 10 linez max you spit then me

yo yo Bloody to shoes you splitzin ditzen and just another convict fleeing the streets like it's easy to the bone takeing the heats// You walk aroundwith a gun in yo hand drunk, suddenly taking some hits and landing in a trunk// you walk aroung crying like a little kid on prolax tryin some recriutin while those bitches up the street are still shootin// something remind you of being a mast shoota, going behind enemy lines and being a crazy intruder// you rob a bank for a cuzzin bussin dozen dollars and screem like a little girl srwewing up the pawlors// but there is no return becaise soon or latter people are going to say you a trader// there is no way this rb jersey man wit his bloody shoes is going to win, because with the shit on my side i will win taking the downslide of sin.//

You stepped up to a killa whos criminally insane/
I'll stick hypodermics through ya jugula vein/
Im lovin it mang, watchin you struggle in pain/
While blood gushin out ya neck like a busted water-mane/
Ya got a soft style, while my shits mentally disturbed/
Droppin a flow sicker then a virus created by microsoft nerds/
I'll do you dirty hommie, you can mark those werds/
My boots'll leave you smeared like do-do on curbs/
You aint know it, but ya fuckn wit a stone cold vet/
In case you don't know yet, ya flows grotesque/
This newbe just been sonned by one the best/
Wit ease Bloody ripped ya fossil from ya flesh/

yoo this battle was takin by bloody hands down

my vote goes to bloody

fav linesbloody)Ya got a soft style, while my shits mentally disturbed/
Droppin a flow sicker then a virus created by microsoft nerds/


Dj:You walk aroundwith a gun in yo hand drunk, suddenly taking some hits and landing in a trunk// you walk aroung crying like a little kid on prolax tryin some recriutin while those bitches up the street are still shootin

this was a good battle

yo i kneed votes for my battle its DA~shadow~knows vs. 24karat reborn

Wow, Bloody came out hard for a new head in the crowd. Dj, you need elevation, seriously. Heres the breakdown...

Opener: Shoes
Flow: Shoes
Punches: Shoes
Disses: Dj
Multis: Shoes
Metas: Dj
Structure: Shoes
Humor: Shoes
Closer: Shoes

Vote: Shoes

Originality - Both
Flow - 2shoes
Personals - Neither
Punches - 2shoes
Meta4s - 2shoes
Multis - 2shoes
Structure - 2shoes

VoTe = 2shoes

Yo dj.. ur structure let u down coz u cant catch a flow which is obviously vital to creatin heavy punches.

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need a few more vote!





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need a few more vote! uppn #2





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blood y 2 shoes was hot as hell give him his orops and vote for da nigga!!!!!!






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good battle but i think that dj you need to work alot on your structure and delivery

bloddy took this easily with punches and flow and his structure

vote:bloddy

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