12 max
no bitin/recyclin
no crew/dr votes
let's do this right now please...

uppin for your drop...

checkin' in.......
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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

I'll start ta spray this gifted kid, till it's like christmas missed em
then put feet all over Meters, like i jumped the metric system
dude listen, you ain't ill, ya just been medically mistreated.....
so the cat in the hat ain't shit but a pussy in a fitted
u shoulda quitted midget get deleted....rid of a fool quick
tryna scale the wall of fame, with just half of a tooth pick
you ugly bitch, and it's some shit that he's still alone too
cuz i'd get personal with M, but even it runs miles from you
ewww....
this gay is twisted sweet, like rows of sugar cane
N then he tries to brainstorm wack punchlines, then it's a hurricane
your run is lame, so watch my game the way i flow styles
and fuck a meters! how i keep doin these 730 miles


^^^that was a quick key i did in like 10 mins.....and i done seen you in the thread for like 20 mins and u still ain't drop shit.......hurry up playa...

Ya rhymes are as played as Flinstones and it makes me sigh clone (cyclone),
Got ya prehistoric mind blown like a cellphone's cancer drone,

battle's like the twilight zone, where the fuck did your punches land?,
Eerie how your defeat comes so perfectly like it was planned,

Before you're defeated, gotta commend you on choice of avatar,
Check the Box X for 'murked' 'cause you play stationery when you spar,

Sig's missing like ya presents(presence) so i haunt ya like Christmas past,
"Amassed only 26 posts..how fucking vast, i've been miscast!!!!"

Leave this herb trashed, like i'm waging a war on elevating n00bs,
How ya gonna ascend when I tied a knot in your umbillical tubes?,

Battling me was a miss-stake, now my incisors are going to sink,
tried to bite off ya verse and got my mouth covered in blots of ink


(No explanations needed, read it and figure it out.)

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

I'd like to get experienced battlers vote on this please.....if you know you're not considered a vet then don't vote.....UPPIN

Well I guess I'm not experienced. Thats because no one votes, so I can't even get a battle record. Once I am experienced, I'll vote on your battles, but can you vote on mine?

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Shit, he changed his avy, now explanation is needed. It used to be Sonic. Sega was fucked out of business by Playstation and X Box. Look for those keywords.

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

Might as well up this.......
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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

Upping once again for votes...................
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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

ok dog this is the breakdown....No hate honest vote here.....

Complex=meters
Structure=meters
Punches=Meters
Personals=both
Overall vote=meters

This battle was nice and all But i cant majorly say that vets have to vote on this shit...And to tell u the truth Both are good verses Just meters had it already planned out to own u! Gj to both .

my favorite lines on both

meters:
Battling me was a miss-stake, now my incisors are going to sink,
tried to bite off ya verse and got my mouth covered in blots of ink

730:
I'll start ta spray this gifted kid, till it's like christmas missed em
then put feet all over Meters, like i jumped the metric system

But yeah most people joke about his name meters...Its getting kinda old dog...So thats another thing why u lost...



Up my battle here also its being slept on...Its really old....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97328



My vote is meters

Complex=both
Structure=meters
Punches=Meters
Personals=both
enjoyment=Meters

Overall vote=meters

not a bad spit man just work on ur structure more and on more wordplay and metas........put an honest vote on my shit in my sig plz as i took the time.,thx...............pz

comon man put an honest vote on thias i took the time http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...4159#post984159 .thx................pz

^^on the real dude i'm new to the site take that in mind i don't know what's been used and hasen't been used before....i'm just doin what i know how to do, if i lose this battle for being new to the site then that's bull....

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

I can't really decide both are pretty good I can't vote sorry
















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