10-15 Lines
No D/R votes
No crew votes
No feedin' off lines
No pre-written shit, etc..

Yea Check Check ........Newtestament"""
Feel it .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .........................

yo, who is gonna go first?
dont matta to me..
hurry up nigga............................................. ....................................

yo if dis fool dont show, i take his spot 2 battle u, bombz. aight, kool.............................................. ....................

you can take his spot right now, he's frotin dawg. if you want to battle, just set it up cuz..........

letz go its set up just check in aight dawg.............................................. ..........................

This Kids -Weak- Like A Baby ''Punch'';
In the -street- less the the Brady ''Bunch''\
Just -face It-,He's-wasted- or crazy ''Dumb'';
-AmaZing-Not from the ^matrix But I am The''One''\\
Gods Second ''Son'' the net prophit Arise like the ''Sun'';
Quick To the ''pun''Quick with Da''gun''--Blast-off And''Run''\\\
A *D.C*''thug''Only having''Fun'' Till my -Chapters- ''Done'';
After ''Funds''Paper chaseing Till the day my -Casket-''Comes''\\\\
I Don't -AsK- for Much Just Some |votes| to |roast| This ''Chump'';
So Its Time to say *Good Night* Hope Your Mom tucked your ''bed tight''........................................... ..............
Cus Right now Your Takeing ~Hits~Like a Paris Hilton ''Web sight''
NeVer Been In A ''lead Fight'' You dont -Tuck The Jake-;
Your Ride My 'Rymes''The way you just -Cut and Paste-\\\\\
So Ppl, Is that enough To get a F()c&ing Vote..........

.................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..................................Uppin

You probably neva met me before, but Ima make you remember me,
ima hit you so hard that ya' computor will loose memory..

That shit you wrote up there looks like you took your time and mastered it, But you still wont beat me if you fell asleep and imagined it....

Like a dream catcher, I captured it, and added it to my `merked` carrage, realizing that your rap-game is as fucked up as Kobe Bryant and his marrage...

Fuqin' wit niggahs who you cant stand up to is a bad habit,
Honestly, you wouldn't go home with this win if you plotted to kidnap it....

Pussy ass niggah, he's from "Washion D.C", soft like "Recees", bout to be tossed and released from this site, seriously, you don't desearve to be seen,
your rank aint higher or below, bout to be squeeze from between, I couldn't call you a niggah, wouldn't even be placed as a queen', cuz "nt" be type of niggah who'd get cut from a girls team....

uppin for votes, lets do this dawg.............................................. .................................................. ........................................

Big Shit right Here ------------------Holla at your boy Newtestament productions,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,Yo Vote for this One'''''Its the reals
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damn herbs..work on your structure and i'll vote....fuck all the "----&*(^%&** type of bullshit...fuck a stretched bar..sorry for freepost....

wass wrong wit a girls team?? lol jplayin took that one to

heart..this was a decent battle yall both had some good punches,

but that was all i really found although bombz was really

simple..yall both could up. but i cant

say but so much when i aint got shit to prove myself sorry icant

poll vote but goodluck guys...i call NtBrave1tN ..gone..

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my head is clouded with senseless doubt
but this seems to be my only escape route
so ill slither my way across the ground
to avoid my blyndedsoul from being found
~*~YOU LIVE YOU LEARN~*~

IP: E2E6 2BC2


uppin for votes, lets do this dawg.............................................. .................................................. ........................................

opener: bombz
closer: tie
punches: Tie
structure: brave
vocab: bombz
wordplay: Tie
overall: bombz

aiight, nice battle peeps,
bombz only took this because he had nicer wordplay, adn his opener was a lil better.
bombz fix ya structure.
brave, take all the '', //. - -, and you dont have to censor yourself.
e.g fu()k,
just write fuck!!!


PLZ TAKE YOUR TIME TO DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS BATTLE, AS I HAVE TAKEN MY TIME TO HIT YOURS UP. THANK U
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...9440#post989440
aiight
peace

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