i do drugs cuz parents apparently replaced tha hugz for hitz
get shit when i come home dad sittin drunk readin the holy korone
moms bitchin wishin i was neva concieved so she mistreats me
with more than i need; fuckin swingin at me so i put her down
then headed for the drunk ass, ass clown;
this is for all the shit you put me through
callin ya only kid a schitz claimin me to be bipolar so fuck you
stride over and come watch me kill your bitch
dont leave cuz next im commin after your shit cunt
with in one hand a phillipes screw and tha otha mcgivers gun
the wrath of thee and three othas baby boys from psyco mothas
i got the world ridin me on this one so your fuckin screwed
i deminished the lies; on my own i unscrambled the truths
unscrambled the reasons for u makin me believe then i was a fuck up
yo struck out; now no time to suck up that doubt
im not as worthless as yo believe ya didnt give me room
room to progress ~n~ succeed just put this slacker out
out on these fuckin streetz to try makin it on my own
to poor to afford food from tha local grocery store
so what makes you think i got a phone
and even if i did ya so called schitz son wouldnt call
yo can shit on ya self cuz while i make it your ignorant ass can crash and fall

couldnt put // cuz it kept erasing ma shit i tried to elevate but i dont think i succeeded

hit this up
rayman g
worth
.::$izzle::.

yo, i like this shit cuz you are commin real with it. This flow sounds deep like, colombine deep.

Yeah this was ok....your structure was alright, it could use some work thought, cause some of your lines were kinda stretched out there at some spots, Try keeping your lines around the same length to help the flow out...also try adding some multies...but keep at it.

..^^>>I agree with ^..your flow was nice...keep up..

Hell Yeah J(This is Ian)Fuck both our worthless excuse of parents

Yea I Enjoyed it but Ya Structure Need Work And Ya Flow was alright..........Ya Vocab and Ya Wordplay Kinder Worked Up A picture in My Head....The Topic was alright But Ya mainly need to Elevate a bit man .....p.€.a.c.€.....

much appreciation fo the feed

Justin...you wanna battle tomorro durin first block?

iight