Yo, wussup with the replies that mainly criticize my work/
I be a little baby gettn patted on the back ready to burp/
Let it be, FTW to all those crows, just hangin in my corn field/
Not doing nothing to help this man of steel/
I don't do it for the mass appeal, this is for da kids and their meal/
I do read otha mc's work with concetrated effort/
some flows sound dope, othas be like reading childs play work/
Clifford da big red dog type of styles these wack mc's need to dial/
That number so easy to remember, dedicated to da to towers/
Thats the way you fu's dat don't reply are going down/
crumbling to the ground breaking mach 1,2, and 3 is da sound/
No way out in this pandimonium escapade, gaseus roach killa/
Yeah, talking about raid the roaches dat don't appriciate/
So when I start pointing fo fives, my trigga finger wont hesitate/
Too scared to read my flows, yeah, its like you just seen a ghost/
One time for your eyes to see, gone with the wind in a breeze/
So fuck da rap game, these are my hobbies as othas stay cocky/
I'm out, so someone get the message, reply back at me/
if ya don't, stay ugly wit all dat killa acne dat wont come off easily/
Even if you sand blast your face, i still will see da scars to trace/

it was alright keep spittin

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Anyway this was alright.ya structure could use some work...some lines were too short some Lines And Some Were too Long....Ya Flow was Good but it di Lack in some bits....ya Vocab was 2 simple.............All and all Keep Elevaten Man And DOn't Forget those Link or Names.....P.€.a.c.€.....