i'm da nigga who is stacking nuff dough/
yeah i own all da hoes/
i got freaky girls ready 2 just jump up on poles/
i'm da pimp master i can mack any bitch/
i am da nigga who invented the magic stick/
so i dare any1 2 come test pimp slimmey/
but no would cause dat would be very silly/
i kno all of u are felling this lyric/
ur probably sayin damn his flow is generic/
anyway i gotta go but i'll be bac/
i'm jettin cause i got some girls to mack/

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I kno u niggaz r second guessin da state i'm in,
Bitch i'm into making hit records dat spin like rims.

Weak Kid,
There Was No Sign Of A Subject In There.You Had No Multis,Metties,Vocab Or Wordplay.You Talked About Yourself Too Much.You Also Talked About Hoes.Which You Probably Don't Even Have.You've Probably Never Ever Touched A Chick.Reading This Rhyme I Figured Theres A 4/5 Chance That Your White.
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wasnt feeling this......too basic....and to short....build up ya scheme and up ya vocab...at the minute its childz play....jus work on it...pZ..........oh and signifikant im fucking white, ya fucking herb and ill MERK you.. little fag........

i kno all of u are felling this lyric/

^lmfao, sure we were

yea i agree with Deva This was Weak man Elevate.....Improve ya Structure ya Flow ya Vocab and Ya WordPlay Aiight.....Elevate Man Keep It Droping....P.€.a.c.€......