10 Lines
Blind spit
due 40 minutes from check in
no feeding or biting
no hate or d/r votes
good luck

checking in now......................good luck.............................................. .................................................. .........................................:banghead :

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His sig says "We're Way Too Witty", cuz bitches play dood shitty
Even If ya punches hit me, i'm fine u swing wit da paws of'a kitty
8-2? I'm not hatin' you, we talkin' newbs and you raped a few
Breakin through, the novice rapist Rb will always make of you
Wish you could Make "The View", tha W i'll hafta take from dood
You spit tight wen you ate some glue, from 1-10 you rate a two
Walter Wall.....You lie gay talkin shit while I just stand straight
Blowin' Army Guards is the only way you'll establish a fan base
You should fuck wit dictionaries ta learn ta play wit ya words
Cuz you couldn't spit sick if you had a mouth full'a milk curds

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Walter's about to ruin ure rec, go ahead beg and plead
Truth is youve elevated.....cuz u got rejected from elite!
Ure up against de best, confess comparitively your wack
U hit hard at the chest...when uve got an asthma attack
And you can cook up sum dope shit...now I'll let you try
Get ure ass in the kitchen technician, make me sum pie!
Denied from LLL, dis kid needs to brush up his alphabet
shit, the only time ure 1 step ahead of me....is on a cliff!
I'd diss ure crew 2, but no one would accept you dawg
and Id say you fell off, but son........you were never on!

opening - walter
flow - walter
struct - walter
punches - tie
multis - tech
metas - tech
closing - walter...tech good attempt

Overall

walter = 4/7
tech = 2/7
tie = 1/7

my vote - walter wall

Favorite Lines From Walter

I'd diss ure crew 2, but no one would accept you dawg
and Id say you fell off, but son........you were never on!

Favorite Lines From Tech

Walter Wall.....You lie gay talkin shit while I just stand straight
Blowin' Army Guards is the only way you'll establish a fan base
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can u please hit up the two battles in my sig and drop an honest vote...much apreciated...

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opener W
closer W
punches W...not played and harder
personals W...witty
wordplay W
overal W

decent battle i guess
peace
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blah....im voting cuz slept on battles are gay.....

vote on this i ask u...honestly....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98207

opener+1-W
closer+1-W
punches+2-W
personals+2-blah...didnt like either
wordplay+1-both weak
multis+1-T
complexity+1-neither
originality+1-neither
best bar+1-W..his opener
consistency+1-neither
cornyness-2-T
enjoyment+1-neither

overall...very weak battle..i seen Tech come way way better.....points go as follows..

Technician (-1)....Walter Wall (+6)---Winner..no hate..now go vote.....honestly please

Descent verses from both, like both in differant category's. But Walter ripped you with his closer lol, that was dope. Wall had stronger punches and personals, so he gets my vote. Would breakdown further but I don't feel the need.
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Damn it, I always forget to leave a thread lmao. Wouldn't have to if more people voted in here Please poll vote on my battle against diverse, and me n bid if u get the chance.
~1~

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98550

WTF won't let me poll vote lol, damn....just ask for a mod, I am a registered voter don't know why it aint workin. My bad lol good battle tho.
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opener - walter
flow - walter
struct - walter
punches - tie
multis - tech
metas - tech
finisher- walter
Overall - walter

decent battle.. but in my opnion walter takes it.. his punches just hit harder and were more accurate than tech's..no hate just a vote..

PZ

upp'n votes

aight here it is
Breakdown--------
Punches-Wall
Flow-Both
Structure-Wall
Enjoyment-Same
Sustainment-Wall
Metas-Wall
Complexity-None
Wordplay..wasnt feeling
Overall-Wall..but watch the elite line
played like a Banjo..but you easily merked

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ...SEEN AS THO I HIT THIS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99336

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