10-15 lines 15 minutes no hate votes ill set up u spit 1st

Aight Man i da world is mine nigga get back
Dont fuck wit my stack, my gadge is whack
i point at ur ass son and u ask me "is.....is
that a gun? I got u scared as fuck u dont
Just look like a chicken u just went clkuck.
You try and talk the talk walk da walk but
den i blow ur fuckin head off. Now its just
me and ur girl, i got ur women puckered up
4 i fuck her up, man its 2 bad its ova dis battle
Wuz fun but i aint perfect i got 99 problems but this bitch
aint 1

are u handicapped cuz ur rap is retarded/
if that shit had 400 energizers it still wouldnt be started/
was u really serious when u spit that at lyrical/
u couldnt win this battle if u had pac and a miracle/
u suck bitch i wish u would die it would be doin RB a favor/
u wouldnt have a win if i quit and come back 20 years later/
check dis u need to quit rap and play pictionary/
while im so smart i rap erry word in the dictionary/
my vocab can be to violence at times/
but the judge wouldnt convict it for demolishin yo weak rymes/ now ur finish and not even johnny cocharn could bell u out/
u against me is like a roy jones and erkel 1 on 1 bout

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pleeze vote !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!o hey good battle dog

Opener: Lyrical
Closer:Austis
Structure: Lyrical
Flow: Lyrical
Humor: Austis
Metaphors:none

overall: Lyrical

nice drops by both of u tho, Austis u shouldn't make part of one scentence the start of a new line it messes up flow and structure
nice dropsby both of u

i was feelin lyrical even tho aust had a really good vibe its jus some of his shit jus didnt make and sense but it was a very good spit on both ways







vote=lyrical

hit this shit up plz
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...&threadid=99275

lyricasl got this all the way, better flow and punches/disses. keep elevating austis, not a bad spit but work on the flow and structure.

peep my battle with nookie check the sig
vote don't sleeeeep

alright here goes

Flow: Lyric
Structure: Aus
Open: Lyric
Close: Aus
Punches: Lyric
Enjoyment: Aus
Rhymes: Lyric

alright battle, but Lyrical took all the importatn ones, he gets my vote.

Yo ......................
Open:Lyricial
Structure:lyrical
Flow:tie
Punches:lyerical
Rymes:Lyerical

Yo Fo' Real-----------Lyerical*****is my Vote#1
Austisdaboss.......
You Got 100 problems,Cuz You Just lost Tis ~One~..............

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Opener: Lyrical
Closer:Lyrical
Structure: Lyrical
Flow: Lyrical
Metaphors:none

Not bad for Newbies. Could have been a lot more strong if you took the time to think. WHy don't you newbies, instead of have'n 15 min battles, and come'n off weak, set a longer due date, so your verses can get stronger, then peeps can give you feedback, and with practice you will elevate.

Vote = Lyrical

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lyrical took this breakdown is as such,....
vocab- lyrical
multi- lyrical
punches-lyrical
personals-none..? i didn't see any..
opener- lyrical..
closer...austisboss.... both of you should take a look at the emergeency center and elevate a lil one love no hate vote lyrical..