10 Lines.
Due Tonite.
Regular Rules Apply.

This is my check in. I'll key something up in a few hours when I get home.

It wouldn't let me post a non-poll. So I just posted two banned names in their.

Voters poll like this.

I'm Iceberg and he is Joe. Just so registered voters vote.

Blah.

Regime is dead kiddo, now your left only with 13th's dick to ride
Hence the name change, considering only cops ever accepted Bribe
Yet you think I lie? Denied on RTM diminished ya hype man
But I don't lie when I say Bribe can hold his own..
... boyfriends hand!
Called a warrior by some, but nobody believes in this fighter
Still I laugh at your attempt to hide behind your ghost writer
Stickin with The Regime, let it be known that wasn't very wise
And I'd even put a shoutout in here for you. . .
but seriously, all jokes aside
Poor kids a loner, no friends and his cell never rings
So I'll connect my first to your temple. .
. . to get you back in the swing of things!

Quick key, I'm in a bad mood as of now and wanted to get this over with. Good luck man.

take your bitching outside, damn I'm tired of foul cry
I'm bloody goring this scene when I'm left spillin Aisle5
disgusted at this kids' persona when i threw this abort
Kalvin banned a heavy load even his crew wont support
what makes u think u could compare!! kid this takes years
cause if my dick was full of opinions, Aisle5 is full of ideas
so much foul play your still heaving even after your fasting
so hand me a pen n pay respect even after your passing
blasting away u never thought i'd be this good at crosswords
so ask the deadly wife in the movie if the cheater ever prospers


g luck man all in good fun....

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No doubt man, coo verse now lets get some voters here.

Up and away.


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Nice little battle..Good contrasts here..heres how it is

Aisle 5- First bar set a great tone..I loved that bar. Very nicely worded and the punch hit nice w/ the sarcasm. Then you let a downfall. You dint have the consistency. You had some good concepts but dint use them to full affect.

Bribe- Bribe you had sustainment all the way thru your verse. The punches weren't knockout but the fact is you hit w/ every line. Thats what won this battle for you. The sustainment was greater than Aisles.

Breakdown---
punches-Jus Bribe
sustainment-Bribe
Metas-Tie
Flow-Both
Structure-Both
Enjoyment-Both
Fav Bar-Aisle
Personals-Tie
Overall-Bribe

Once again props to both peace

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

Hehe, your favorite bar of mine was my worst bar. What are you smoking?

Anyway, lets get some more votes in here. Thanks.

1-0 ..after two days...=)
let's get some votes please.
I know this will take a while..lol
so I up for glory I up for votes.

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Uppin for votes!

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Come on nigger faces lets get this over with sometime soon!

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this is sad noone can check a little battle out you ..take two minutes out of your life.. and just post a god damn opinion

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this battle was blah. bribe usually comes much better and so does aisle 5. thats prolly why kids arent votin`, but anyway. . vote = aisle 5 cuz bribe had one played line. basically thats all there was to vote on.. sorry guys. & no point to pollin so just count this ne way .

I wasn't voting cuz of the crew thing or whateva
but ure both my homiez and you know Ill vote honest
Best from Aisle
Regime is dead kiddo, now your left only with 13th's dick to ride
Hence the name change, considering only cops ever accepted Bribe
Yet you think I lie? Denied on RTM diminished ya hype man
But I don't lie when I say Bribe can hold his own..
... boyfriends hand!
Best from bribe
what makes u think u could compare!! kid this takes years
cause if my dick was full of opinions, Aisle5 is full of ideas

I've seen you both come better
but Aisle had less played punches and a thought came with an overall better verse
Vote - Aisle 5

^Agree

Aisle Came Better With Punches And Personals, Bribe Had Some Nice Hits And Everything But None Really Seemed Direct Until Except For Two Lines, The Closer And The One Mentioning His Crew, Aisle's Verse Stayed Consistent And Pretty Good

Opener - Aisle
Closer - Bribe
Structure - Bribe (Aisle's Was Shit)
Vocab - Aisle
Personals - Aisle
Punches - Aisle
RhymeScheme - Aisle
Overall - I Agree With Feeble, Bribe Has Dropped Better, But Aisle Gets This With Just Better Punches


If You Want Me To Poll I Will But I Gotta Wait For My Registered Voter Thing To Be Activated

Nothins wrong with my structure. . it's just part of my rhyme scheme. . pal.

3-1 me ... ..........................................

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