Yo these are the rules:

10-12 lines
No crew or hate votes. Lets try to keep this fair.
Loser must give props to the winner, to show respect for an opponent.

Aight Word Forward. You got 15 minutes to spit.

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The Madman

Breakdancer in Brooklyn

Checkin in for the win.. Keying now............................................... .................................................. .........

If you don't understand the wordplay don't vote

Givin you a heated battle and sit back to watch your lines burn
Fuck tearing you limb from limb..... i'll rip you Word For Word
You're a madman........ Breakdancing in the streets of New York
This kid couldnt get a grip on beef if his middle name was fork
I'm not trying to be rude...... but kid you stand a meek chance
Your moves are stupidly obscene... like a retard teaching dance
On bar 4 and haven't tried....... But i'll still merk this herb
Shit.... Killing this kid so bad he'll kick himself to the curb
I'm Bonding (007) Madman... After this his screen will turn red
So i'll end this verse at line 10... And give you 2 lines ahead

Let's go man... you 10 minutes.....
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Ha, hot shit. Check this:

Ha, I've seen you grab beef but it was just a dick in ya hand/
What the hell you know about the B-Boy's land/
Shit you couldn't rip paper if you had a machete/
My rymes and flow will rip you straight into confetti/
You callin' me a herb, you got it in reverse/
Is my dancin' all you can diss? cause it's all thats in ya verse/
Bitch ya shit is so basic you need to elevate/
The only thing you get pussy is if you sedate and rape/
Bitch you won't be takin' when I hang you out ya fire escape/
The only way you shut up is if I shut ya mouth with tape/
I'll rip out ya intestine and leave you with no spine/
After you lose this battle, in ya house you need to recline/

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The Madman

Breakdancer in Brooklyn

Opener: WF
Punches: WF
Personals: WF
Wordplay: Tie
Flow: Madman
Closing: WF (Mad Ive used something very similar to that... Madman elevate mroe and WF Ur going good on da grind.

Thanks for the vote but can you please poll?

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uppin 2.

Please vote on this if you see it.

It's hard being classified as a n00b.

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Aiight........

Heres da breakdown!

Opener-Wf
Punch's-md(very weak)
Flow-md
Vocab-Wf
Wordplay-Wf
Structure-Wf
Closer-Wf
Overall-Wf

Vote-Word Forward

0n3

^^ Punch's-Tie........can a mod fix dat or sumtin!!......srry bout dat!........aiight stop sleepin n vote!

0n3

word foward got this, he had better wordplay, structure, and punches. Seems like a vet/fake newbie cat..LOL madman your verse was aight, but i didn't see any hard punches you even tried to come back at him and made your self look worse, sorry just how i see it. vote=wf

stay up ya'll

thanks..
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Someone forgot to poll...

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ite,

flow=wf
closer=tie
opener=wf
enjoyment=wf
personals=poor
punches=wf

overall=wf not a bad verse man.......................pz


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