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Old 12-18-03, 01:35 AM   #1
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My First Audio......."Love Song"

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aight yall it's my first audio i did it really quick i need to fix it up a bit but tell me what yall think about it so far....http://www.soundclick.com/bands/0/tckmusic.htm
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Old 12-18-03, 01:38 AM   #2
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I rocked this beat madd long ago lol...anyways...

Really this is not that bad for a first audio ...ya quality is pretty nice...ya flow is aight..but it kind of sounds like your reading your lyrics of a piece of paper..ya dilvary is nice ...ya hook is blah...

Overall dude..this is pretty nice for a first audio..let alone a love song..

Just keep elevating and you will turn out nice...

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Old 12-18-03, 08:20 AM   #3
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Old 12-18-03, 10:22 AM   #4
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thanks fo tha fedd back man uppin.....................
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Old 12-18-03, 12:46 PM   #5
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listening....


dope beat..

flows sick, hooks ill, like the style,

it sounds like you are reading just put some more feeling itd be dope


check out

another drop from billy
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Old 12-18-03, 07:57 PM   #6
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Thanks alot man uppin for feedback
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Old 12-18-03, 09:31 PM   #7
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did it really quick??


Some advice, post something WORTH LISTENING TO, which means, take the time to do a decent (SP??) audio.

the voice over makes you sound like a robot

....same tone of voice makes it boring..

but if u say its your first then..blah

pz
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Old 12-19-03, 07:12 PM   #8
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Uppn. fo feedback yall
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Old 12-19-03, 08:41 PM   #9
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feelin ya style n ya voice, but the track is koo.... loved the beat... but overall its a pretty nice track... nice quality...
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Old 12-21-03, 05:48 PM   #10
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C'mon yall...........
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Old 12-22-03, 04:54 PM   #11
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Keep tha feedback commin....
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Old 12-22-03, 11:58 PM   #12
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I thought this was pretty nice....

ya flow was on for the most part.....I like these kinda songs.....

Nice track....
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Old 12-23-03, 07:34 PM   #13
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thanks ^^^^^ thats what i likr to hear
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Old 12-23-03, 09:19 PM   #14
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i liked it..... witty lines, pretty good flow.... keep postin
holla back
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Old 12-25-03, 03:48 AM   #15
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This is sum nice shit from u bro. Cant wait to release our collaboration and tha 3 songs me, you, and MBP gonna record. Holla back.
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