12 lines max
no hate, d/r, crew votes
blind spit
30. min to drop after check in
good luck

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Cool....Checking in man....

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let me key something up real quick

eiyo

my first line seizes you tight, steady clenchin your chest
now your going into shock similar to that of cardiac arrest
i've been bestowed with intelligence superior and far beyond
you shouldn't respond, first time experience for you to be sonned
nobody votes for you, only thing you'll get is an online laugh
a horrible aftermath, i'm goin to ya grave and spittin on ya epitaph
so drop what you want, but believe i'll keep it very personal
rehearse your flow, i'm pissin all over your verse like a urinal
this verse already has you killed, i got a toe tag with your name
but you go unnoticed,not even good enough to be my claim to fame
my lyrics diagnose you with third degree burns, lesson learned
now your so depressed i got both of your parents concerned


blah, not my best but whatever, i'm gonna go smoke a cigarrette and i'll check back

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it's been thirty minutes though dude....just lettin ya know you need to drop soon or else it leads to disqualification...but no hate just a heads up...one.

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Straight up... I'm serving this kid my basic sig text/
Asked him his a/s/l/ 'n he thought I was bein com-plex/
Think ya ill? Ya small change... I wouldn't give a penny for those thoughts/
For real....This fool tried getting Jin's album thru chinese im-port/
Why you even chose to step ups a bigger mystery than 'J.R's/
Sure... 'Dallas' got some real 'diversity'........ peeps now own cars/
21 and on the net? Outdone by pre-pubescents considered pros/
Painting ya moms nails is the closest you've come to 'tagging' toes/
This kids nothing...plain wack...< 'n thats hardly critisism/
I mean even his household mirrors comply to the witness system/

aight people that's it lets get some votes on this battle, drop your link too if you need the favor returned

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Punches-Diverse
Flow-Diverse
Structure-Tie i guess
Personals-Diverse (Aftermath needs to encorporate these)
Style- Diverse
Vocab- Diverse

That's my breakdown. Pretty one sided in my humble opinion. Good battle guys. Check this link, it's been slept on for ages.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=Meters

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escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

hey meters you forgot to poll, thanks for the honest vote though, still need more votes blah blah blah blah blah blah

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meters says

" Punches-Diverse
Flow-Diverse
Structure-Tie i guess
Personals-Diverse (Aftermath needs to encorporate these)
Style- Diverse
Vocab- Diverse "

I couldnt have put it better myself


Vote = Diverse

Repay favour please yall

Punches-Diverse
Flow-Diverse
Structure-Tie i guess
Personals-Diverse (Aftermath needs to encorporate these)
Style- Diverse
Vocab- Diverse

Opening: Diverse
Punches: Aftermath (Kinda felt his more)
Personals: Neither
Wordplay: AM
Vocab: AM
Flow: Diverse
Structure: Diverse
Closing: Tie
Overall: Im gonna give it to AM because I felt his hatred more

sorry i ment to put this link

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99777


repay favour

Cool....theres personals there tho man......

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no hate, but diverse took this easy- lemme break it down
nice battle tho
Open: Diverse
Vocabiverse
Punches: Diverse
Closer: Diverse
Structure: Tie
Vote = Diverse..

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My people skills are way better then yours, nigga..

o shit my bad
forgot bout the 100 post rule =\
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My people skills are way better then yours, nigga..

ok heres the breakdown.....
Vocab:diverse
Flow:diverse
Complex:diverse
Structure:diverse
Punches:uhh tie
Personalls:diverse
Overall Vote:diverse

Do i need to explain....Diverse took this in every category!

hit up my battle to diverse since ur 300 posts.....Vote honestly!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99337