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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
The Aftermath 0 0%
Word Forward 5 100.00%
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Old 12-18-03, 08:37 PM   #1
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Word Forward Vs. The Aftermath (PLEASE VOTE!)

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10 Lines Max.
Due 30 minutes after check in.
I have 30 minutes after you spit.
No D/R Votes.
No Hate Votes.
No Crew Votes.

Good luck.
 
Old 12-18-03, 08:39 PM   #2
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Man.....we both drop in 30 mins.............................................. .......................
 
Old 12-18-03, 08:49 PM   #3
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Just PM me when you're ready to drop and i'll pm you back if i'm ready that way we both post same time..
 
Old 12-18-03, 09:41 PM   #4
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You see your small................. I sit back and im still standing tall
I'd go on about how i'ma rip you.............. but your sig said it all
You're getting a BIG L_____________And I do hate to be snug
But I'll leave your face more spread out than the spacing above
Shit.... You couldn't be number 1 if your last name was McGrady
The Aftermath? Get original Because you're acting rather shady
Now this is nothing personal......... No really....... I want no beef
Because beef would be pointless....... With a man with no meat
You were undefeated.............. Until you fell victim to a non-herb
Your W direction has just hit a curb.... and took the wrong curve
 
Old 12-18-03, 09:44 PM   #5
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Word Forward's text lyrics leave him behind....whats up with that?/
This kids a joke, ya not that tight 'dawg'...its just 'puppy phat'/
Words forwarded extensively...used so much the letters look worn out/
Weak punches...I'm new but shit....a featherweight bout??/
Like hidden christmas gifts, you'll never 'rip' me but you always 'feel' my 'prescence'/
Ya momma screaming in the shower....Its me.....not herbal essence/
'East to west'...I'm 'casting shadows' on this fool...a human sundial/
Word could empty clips in empty supermarkets and even then, still 'missiles'/
Like peepin ya own face..... ya wins plain impossible kid/
With those played punches ya drops draw more 'blank stares' than ya sig/
 
Old 12-18-03, 09:56 PM   #6
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Uppin.....

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Old 12-18-03, 09:57 PM   #7
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Opening: WF
Punches: WF
Personals: WF
Flow: WF
Vocab: tie
Wordplay: WF
Structure: WF
Closing: TA
Overall: WF

Merked...
 
Old 12-18-03, 10:00 PM   #8
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I hate to be a bitch man.....but vote real....you know what wordplay is? Opening......etc...................
 
Old 12-18-03, 10:05 PM   #9
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nice battle by both cats. both had good punches, and multis, and structure. ta, you came hard and came good for a newb, and like i said you had good multis, and punches.
wf, you had some good punches, multis, and some nice personals.
overall, wf barely edged it out with the personals, and slightly better punches
vote- word forward

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Old 12-18-03, 10:26 PM   #10
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aiight..........

Opener-Wf
Punch's-Wf
Flow-Wf
Wordplay-A
Vocab-Wf
Structure-Wf
Closer-A

Overall-Wf
Vote-Wf

Nice battle!

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Old 12-18-03, 11:33 PM   #11
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Thanks y'all..

uppin 1


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Old 12-19-03, 12:18 AM   #12
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vote WORD
the other cat used a goft/presence line man come on.. word had straight forward punches both had some filler word had a smoother flow, and more consistant so he gets eht vote

HIT MY BATTLE UP
 
Old 12-19-03, 08:31 AM   #13
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Leave a link homie ^

uppin 2................
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Old 12-19-03, 12:37 PM   #14
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Quote:
Originally posted by Center Sight
vote WORD
the other cat used a goft/presence line man come on..


Do you actually understand the meaning of it??

Like hidden christmas gifts, you'll never 'rip' me but you always 'feel' my 'prescence'/

It has wordplay/metas/creativity in one line......

straight up...I agree with all the voters 'n votes, but it'd be safe if peeps actually read shit thoroughly....

Still uppin tho....
 
Old 12-19-03, 06:07 PM   #15
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^ Stop vote swaying.. I could take some of my lines that I guarantee not everyone got and explain further skill into them.. But I have more class than that.

Uppin 3.....
 
 


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