8 lines
15 mins

basic rules (no bitin' ,etc..)


you spit 1st yo: thumbup:

checkin in
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Iight spit yo
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What?!this bitch thinks he can win n beat me,
they only way u winnin is if u can repeat me.
You say u grim dezzy,well im lewdicrsly sleezy,
you 14,lookin like lil weezy,sceamin "im needy".
You sure do, sayin a dick in tha ass would sure"please me".
Talkin bout Apocolypse, while im Apocolypse now,
im bout to film u cryin like Francis ford coppla, "WOW".
Now u thinkin how did he come up with that shit,"HOW!"
you realized ur shit is weak like ur arms,heres a gun go ahead!
"POWWW!"

* hes 14
*Apocolypse is in his profile
*Francis ford Coppola filmed Apocolypse Now.a movie
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I'd like to thank you for makin' this so easy , check it..

hey everybody you gotta hear this tryin' to diss grim D are you blind stupid or fearless//
listen here miss if your insist to diss and you persist
you'll just cease to exist// speak to the fist nigga cause I don't wanna hear it approachin'
me is a good way to put end to your career quick//
so talk shit and diss you hatin' because you fear it // hate untill you come to tears bitch you
can't get near it // I'll put a fuckin' hex your spirit thru these lyrics and diss you to
death even when you die you can feel it // I'm just cold , we'll kill you , then have a
fuckin' seance just to bring your ass back and battle your soul// if you wanna be bold I
can tie your ass up and send you screamin' as you fuckin' roll down a rocky knoll
(AHH!!!) // so you a thug? I'll break in while you snug in your little bed and shoot your
ass up like a drug // but I dont mean wit
a needle I decapatate you live on CNN just to show the world that I'm evil // you thinkin' you the best not really fool you dont wanna see me
like I'm fuckin' Gili 2 //

fuckin sissy

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oops I kinda went over didn't I? oh well take the win like that if u wanna I still riped you

peace

Aiight...............

Opener-Grim
Punch's-Grim
Flow-Grim (lewd wasnt bad but basic)
Vocab-Grim
Wordplay-Grim
Structure-lewd
Closer-Grim

Overall-Grim
Vote-Grim

Lewd alls i can say is ELEVATE!.........Grim fix ur structure soo its easier to follw n you'l be straight!.....

0n3

(return da favor-Flowz Vs Meters)

.......and read my sig i cant poll vote!.....soo sorry!