Merkin-his-diction then worsen-afflictions when i prove hes a coward and disperse-his-depiction
Terse-wit-this-sentence, D depleted whatever spine he had when he dropped his verse-against-Dropz//
And ya text? like passin kidney stones you hardly flow, no showed to me so i know u wont be good-as-a-rival (arrival)
Might as well be blind-though, never see personals when ya verses are based on names like the books-in-the-bible//
Deprived-hoe gets an abusing-wit-rhythm for being a bitch for vets,secret fan of me and a groupie-to-Dropz
To think i used to loosely-defend-him till i found out his story was about dickridin and bars like movies-of-prison//
So while you're assuming-positions ill formulate an attack-of-my-own and put lyrical bullets in the back-of-ya-dome
A disasterous-clone of the whackest-of-foes gets an axe-in-his-nose cuz i shit on MC like mcdonalds served me a laxative-cone//
Cant match-wit-a-pro cuz my lyrics like slammin chess boards over your head with the way my raps-a'pawn-you (upon)
Its a fact-ill-harm-you when i can simply flow at ya verse and have your entire bar structure collapsin-on-you//
This kids-a-winner? nah your wacker than most, not even a text vet so its my duty as the illest to tip-beginners
Math must be shit cuz multis confuse you when this bitch-contender stays dashin out of place like failed olympic-sprinters!!

3links:
Sun
Dropz
Sun

even though it was bitten
lemme critque it for BluePrint
Blue - beautiful flow/diss on me
first 2 lines were ur's most of the others were bitten
peace

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My people skills are way better then yours, nigga..

yo line about cone and olympics was ill..and I checked on that can flow and it was not bitten,i dunno know why they hatin on you cause you got mad skillz

yo that was tight
tha flow was good and word use was Ill

Wrong go check his other verse called 'wordplay' bitten off canibus
2nd.
this is bitten of an underground rapper called BluePrint, song is called "BootLegged"
fucking idiot

damn u know ur shit viscosity nice work i love busting biters

also a good way is to search on google

I dont do google.. I know real Emcee shit... this is garbage he took the word 'Bus' and put 'viscoisty' in there.. lets be real
faggot

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My people skills are way better then yours, nigga..

damn yo... dats some crazy ass shyt... damn dunny

UR GONNA GET BANNED

I felt it a lil, But Vis put the vice grips on his head and bust his ass, get him, bittin ass bitch, think of your own shit, hoe