DOUGH OK FUCK ILL BREAK IT DOWN MORE FOR OYU


You Rapped like this

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Structure fucked up

Your shit Dditn even ryhme i read the HOLE THING yes i did




He Said " I think ive got bout 80'-way this kid bites so much u'd think he started rabies/5
Callin himself a lethal lyracist?' when it's more like talent wit both wrists-
It's not even a competition like hitler dealin witta bitch on schindler's list-/6
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Thats dopeness


there ya go ya sore loser

^^ stop postin god damn it.
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are you on crack? let me break down your verse..

It's pathetic this Ho's Stile is worth'less on the net he can't even getta e-loan-

.....?

I Crack hostile's mom's dome witta old school cell-phone.. n leave em foster home'd-/1

That shit was wack...now your just rhyming words with words.

Now who's owned? shit... i lowered his tone quicker then the fall of rome-

filler.

Remove that chrome!-thinkin' u Bizzy Bone..step-off..u jus another newbie clone-/2

???????????? WACK.

Merk u? please...I'd put in for negative wage...herb's like u will never age-

...wack.

Re-think...this aint a game on Engage-..my 12 gauge will break ya rib cage-/3

Decent filler.

Set em off wit gospel spit...only this 3:6(666) wont spirit but break ya hips-

Filler.

So chap ya lips....bitch....only way get vic's is when ur cock-rock equipped-/4

Decent. best line in your wack verse.

U kno u'r just another wannabee shady' who will probly talk bout Carson Daily-

..WACKEST line in your verse.

I think ive got bout 80'-way this kid bites so much u'd think he started rabies/5

Biting=Rabies lines are played. get some new shit.

Callin himself a lethal lyracist?' when it's more like talent wit both wrists-

......Wack.

It's not even a competition like hitler dealin witta bitch on schindler's list-/6

Decent. Still wack though

I could go on an continue to rip' but it's useless'like shaq's assists...-

Filler.

He call's his shit hit's?...fuk then u oughta call my spit a grand eclipse/7
cause ill erase his writts.

Weak ass fuckign closer. weaker than mine. please. dont even dare say your shit was hot. Writts is spelled writs. eclipse has nothing to do with writs...you have no idea what you are talking about. we need someone in here that knows talent.

yo dough hostile took this - he had the punches, metas better verse all around

yo carson work on ya punches, that shit was cool for freestylin or somethin but not a battle but you got skillz

props to both drop an honest vote at the link in the sig

Before 12 as said, id whoop your ass for RB to see
this kid like crap floating, bouyant (boy-aint) shit to me

^thats fucking nice wordplay.

he'd dodge me, rather than fight...or settle wit words in court
so when he sees me its a running situation, like 3rd n short

Come on now. Open your eyes.

and erase u, takin the plot like satan it's hot

u a baller? ill watch u fade away without even takin the shot
I'll best ya, I see ya try to change voters minds, I watch wit a shrug

Ya last battle ya suade (SWAYED) so much, I thought that it was a pair of Lugz

carson check it, ill have your verse Eden (eaten) foo
n if we banned the ‘bad-apples’ in RB..u’d be forbidden, fruit

but thats enough for now jet, you just got sonned
like little fucking kindergardens, you went home round 1. (around 1)

weak closer. But my fucking verse killed your shit. Sit down.

ok u kno what Im not dealin wit herbs....

Im not even lookin at this thread again....
1500 posts in 5 minutes an already this fools votin on his own battle...

u need a net win that bad take it....im not here to argue a win

pc*1*

Its not about the win. Its about the dickryder you have on your balls begging you to vote on his shit and he repays the favor?

WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOW No its about dough hostile being a little whiny bitch sore loser

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wait a second......this is all pre-writtin......

Before 12 as said, id whoop your ass for RB to see
this kid like crap floating, bouyant (boy-aint) shit to me
he'd dodge me, rather than fight...or settle wit words in court
so when he sees me its a running situation, like 3rd n short
and erase u, takin the plot like satan it's hot
and how are u a baller?
when u fade away without even takin the shot
I'll best ya, I see ya try to change voters minds, I watch wit a shrug
Ya last battle ya suade so much, I thought that it was a pair of Lugz
carson check it, ill have your verse Eden (eaten) foo
n if we banned the ‘bad-apples’ in RB..u’d be forbidden, fruit
but thats enough for now jet, you just got sonned
like little fucking kindergardens, you went home round 1. (around 1)

look at the bold....i dont even have a last battle....
I was wonderin why u had not one personal.....
I wasn't gonna post any more till i realized this.....
now I know why ur mad....I beat u witta free-style and ur's was Pre-writ

i looked at carson jet vs. alias u fag. sit down //////////////////////////////////////////////// 100 chars.

really?....hmm its 0-0 in there.......
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dough hostile
Before 12 as said, id whoop your ass for RB to see
this kid like crap floating, bouyant (boy-aint) shit to me
kk, i dunno y nobody picked up dat shit, but dats ill, do u even noe wat buoyant is? lmao, good line man =)

he'd dodge me, rather than fight...or settle wit words in court
so when he sees me its a running situation, like 3rd n short
its iight, opener was better

and erase u, takin the plot like satan it's hot
and how are u a baller?
when u fade away without even takin the shot
i dunno where dat punch came from, does he claim sumwhere dat he is a baller? gimme sum evidence

I'll best ya, I see ya try to change voters minds, I watch wit a shrug
Ya last battle ya suade so much, I thought that it was a pair of Lugz
"I cant vote and I dont wanna sway the votes but all I gotta say is someone got wrecked and it wasnt no soldier"
Quote one of ur "crew" members. Nuff said.

carson check it, ill have your verse Eden (eaten) foo
n if we banned the ‘bad-apples’ in RB..u’d be forbidden, fruit
pretty nice line. Liked the holy garden of Eden thing, the punch didn't hit too hard tho.

but thats enough for now jet, you just got sonned
like little fucking kindergardens, you went home round 1. (around 1)
haha nice closer. Wasnt as strong as the rest of ur battle but it was iight.


CarsonJetX2
It's pathetic this Ho's Stile is worth'less on the net he can't even getta e-loan-
I Crack hostile's mom's dome witta old school cell-phone.. n leave em foster home'd-
Nice multies, but im sry, dat openin punch was weak.

Now who's owned? shit... i lowered his tone quicker then the fall of rome-
Remove that chrome!-thinkin' u Bizzy Bone..step-off..u jus another newbie clone-/
Ill lead up, the rome n bizzy shit was tight, but newbie clone???...come on man, u ran outta rhymin words lol. Ill multies tho.

Merk u? please...I'd put in for negative wage...herb's like u will never age-
Re-think...this aint a game on Engage-..my 12 gauge will break ya rib cage-/3
Der u go! dat punch was pretty ill, i like dat one.

Set em off wit gospel spit...only this 3:6(666) wont spirit but break ya hips-
So chap ya lips....bitch....only way get vic's is when ur cock-rock equipped-/4
hehe. looks like hes pickin up heat, 2 in a row.

U kno u'r just another wannabee shady' who will probly talk bout Carson Daily-
I think ive got bout 80'-way this kid bites so much u'd think he started rabies/
awwwww, u were on a roll, dough was right, rabies r played out man.

Callin himself a lethal lyracist?' when it's more like talent wit both wrists-
It's not even a competition like hitler dealin witta bitch on schindler's list-
haha, nice shit der, i like dat meta

I could go on an continue to rip' but it's useless'like shaq's assists...-
He call's his shit hit's?...fuk then u oughta call my spit a grand eclipse/7
cus I erase his writt's...
Meh, the shaq part was pretty weak, the eclipse~erase writts part was pretty good. Iight finisher.


Overall
Well dough hostile started out hard, when a lil soft, and picked it up, but his finisher wasnt too good. CarsonJetX2 started out whack, picked it u[ and then also ruined the finisher. But when I really break it down...dough hostile comes out victorious. CarsonJetX2, ur ill with the multies but sometymes it just seems like ur throwin shit in der just to take up room which really kills ur punches. Structure and flow tho...CarsonJetX2 does take it but remember. Punches win battles when the battlefield dust has cleared...not structure and flow.



Hit me up with honest votes with the links in my sig plz. thx.

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nice battle over abut De took it
w/ harder punches

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sorry u have to say that carson took this i mean he had more structure, flow, punches so in my mind he won_______________________________________________ __