Her Last Stand:

N LitEnd:

There She Stood, Graceful And Honorable, No Worries
Adrenaline Flurries, Mind State Elevates And Hurries
Pure & Peaceful, She Glances Down On Those Below
Not That She’s Better, She Believes More Than Her Fellows
With A Subtle Mellow, Unheard Of Pout, Smile Occurs
The World Is Hers, In The Clench Of A Fist, Paths Appear
Laughs She Hears, Other’s Lost In The Wind, She Stands Strong
Its Where She Belongs, Fulfilment Is Here, She Cant Be Wrong
Goddess’ She’s Among, Reached Her Peak, Now Teach & Preach
At Least She’s Neat, So Precise Like From Her Mothers Teat
They Take Her Hand, With Her They Feel Safe, Loved Almost
The Good And The Bad Grasp, They See Their Exit At Most
But They Will Be Her Downfall, For She Only Has Two Hands
The Evil In This World Bring Us Down, Its Her Last Stand


Edicius:

Customer left,last one she's fucked and confused,
she gets payed late at night &.. still feels abused.
Thats it for 2nite after a shower crawls in bed&hide
$she have,she smiles,still she's broke down inside
Last night, a 'man' told her that he knows a way out
filling her up with fright &combined w/a multiple doubt
her head starts spinning,same words diff guy as in the beginning
he helped her 'yea in this shithole, & now he's the one grinning
she know what to do, learned 'dreams' arent ment for her to come true
But still feels a little hope,& this pays bills oh well dont know what to do
& w.e 2morrow another day,stop this hard thinking,stop screaming
she's letting her head sinking into the pillow & starts dreaming
About a pact she needs to close with her self about her self respect..

Fear for changes detroys too much ..

__________________
LLL LW Champ
<center>Soft Focus</center>

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100135
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100640
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100767

The Links..

__________________
LLL LW Champ
<center>Soft Focus</center>

Werdizzle

Up^^

__________________
Fuck you

pretty nice collabo here
nlitend...
came with a good fresh concept and i liked the image of the woman in this...
evoked some cool pictures and shit
really managed to get into it

eddy...another good verse
probably one of the better ive seen from you content wise
liked the picture u painted of the woman..
and her struggle and shit
likied this ..good job
props

Thnx man = )

__________________
Fuck you

Fgee's Love Child Is Edicius..



Up..

__________________
LLL LW Champ
<center>Soft Focus</center>

that was a good collab.....the first verse came better with flow....the second verse was phat at the beginnin' but then seemed to drag off at the end....but overall that was a nice spit from both you katz...it was a good subject to...made me think....peace..

__________________
Knowledge Is King

Up^

__________________
Fuck you

..Nice work..both MC's were on point with their wordplay and content..But I must say I did enjoy the first verse a little more..but both were extremly nice...

N lit end

dope flow...nice content...painting pictures with words

Ed..more of the emotional side of this collabo..nice

2 verse go together nicely

good collabo guys

i liked n lit ends rhyme scheme and it seemed to have more of a deeper side to it than edicius verse but i did like this collab...

favourites lines from N Lit End were

There She Stood, Graceful And Honorable, No Worries
Adrenaline Flurries, Mind State Elevates And Hurries

Laughs She Hears, Other’s Lost In The Wind, She Stands Strong
Its Where She Belongs, Fulfilment Is Here, She Cant Be Wrong

and from ed i liked

Thats it for 2nite after a shower crawls in bed&hide
$she have,she smiles,still she's broke down inside

she's letting her head sinking into the pillow & starts dreaming
About a pact she needs to close with her self about her self respect..

nice stuff

cant say anything else for this to be better

Thanks For The Replies..

Up..

__________________
LLL LW Champ
<center>Soft Focus</center>

Deeper lol..

Up^

__________________
Fuck you

seem this sorta thing many times...but i thought you executed it well.....both had some good imagery...and feeling into it... both quite a similar style....went together well......nice work....pZ