15-20 lines
due 12/25/03
no hate
DR
crew
or any of that shit votes

my mission is to leave this cat missin
trophy prize to a fishin competition
my rhymes to great for him,
he cant comprehend
his battle weak, like iraqi capitol defence
his rhymes condensed
have about the mass as one of my bars
he might open a can, but ive been openin jars(think whoopass)
im like the stars, he like mars,
i outshine this bitch
and i could predict his rhymes
better then a dummys ventriloquist
im sick of this
i gotta lotta shit to complain about
id rather forfiet this battle
then hear what comes out his mouth
nah id rather see him pout
so ill see it through to the end
but this guy needs help
"anyone got a helping hand they can lend"?

i said only 20 lines, so i guess it has to finish
but one question, what line did i win this?

i should have said 20 bars, but oh well

damn been a while since i battled........................................... ..............................................

you gonna hit this up???????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ?????????????????????????????????????????????????? ????

sorry dude...got caught up in X-mas shit...I'll post in a few.........
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this kats rhymes are old and played just like an antique/
you tha center of attention when packed by a mans meat/lyrically
these disses are recieved lethal, ur preceived feeble/
you couldn't pen sick lyrics written wit a diseased needle/
your soul is split? guess your not a religious professional/
but why does this boy still take condoms to his confessional?/
I hurt these bi/gays in drive bys while I squirt heat sideways/
Cuz I'm the road to success, Ur boyfriend's cruisin Ur hershey highway/
I leave kats who oppose me on stuck, like Colin Farrell in Phone Booth/
Gotta girl? well I'm tha sniper, shootin my ammo at her tooth/

be honest........4-1 i expected better....14-5 i expected better

ne ways....
punches- force
flo- split
structure- force
multi's- force
meti4's- force
overall force.......split...witta style like that...u wont handle people who have skills.....
dark...u've had alotta time off...still rusty....

both hit dis witta honest vote...thanks
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101438

Honest Vote: Darkforce

Split - Get Focused Man, You can do way better
Force - Tight Flow and the Metaphors were sick (like a poisioned needle) :-)

Please return the favor you guys and give an honest vote on my battles... I'd appreciate it.... I'm trying to get them closed out.

uppin fo votes....I will return tha favor...just drop a link................
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My bad forgot the links....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101439
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101456

Let me know Honestly what y'all think...

Complexity:...
Creativity: Dark Force
Punches: Dark Force
Personals:...
Delivery: Dark.. Had some multis i.e perceived-feeble/ diseased-feeble
Vote: Dark Force

Rationale: Neither verse was good but Dark was better in the categories listed above..

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You Only Hear "You Better" When It's a Command

Complexity:...
Creativity: Dark Force
Punches: Dark Force
Personals:...
Delivery: Dark.. Had some multis i.e perceived-feeble/ diseased-needle
Vote: Dark Force

Rationale: Neither verse was good but Dark was better in the categories listed above..

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You Only Hear "You Better" When It's a Command

come on peeps...don't sleep on this shit...I will return the favor if ya drop a link.............................................. ..............

this was a clean battle but Dark took this killed the kid
damn
vote- dark better flows an punches
plus i wasa feelin his structure...

ill poll it when i can ill be back to tho


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101625
^6 just VET battle gettin slepted on..2