Methodz
Some times I wonder what’s the real point of growing up.
When your door of opportunity slowly starts to close shut.
After years of broken hearts and sadness of loved ones dying.
You find yourself wet and sick cause your old and crying.
What is it in life were finding?, the real meaning of heartace.
And every since I started to grow up faster I felt my heart break.
Nights of crying because I don’t want my parents to leave me.
And when I try tell my close ones they either laugh or not believe me.
Writing this now crying, but in life who is the one who cares?.
My heart just tears because its juts full of un replied prayers.
I scared, cuz I don’t want to forget the good memories Ive taken.
Didn’t have the time to say sorry for all the trouble ive makin.
If u really think about it life is quick unless u take the time to respect it.
But I cant turn back and correct it, cuz my child hoods been rejected.
Would never expect it, being a kid were the best days of my life.
But I wish I could go back and respect the days that went by…


Mental God
As I look back on child-hood memories, I can't help but wonder
Did I take the time to really live life, or let it roll by like thunder
Was it just a sound in the backround, or did I listen intently
Did I take the time to look around, or let childhood slip contently
And incidentally, I can't paint a pretty picture of the past
Im trying to so slow down my mind, but time seems to fly by fast
I used to read the Flash, but now my mind is set on cash
Stepped a foot as an adult, and Im already about to crash
Childhood flame is now an ash, and a quarter of my life is over
No more fighting about if Santa is real, gotta struggle to stay sober
No more four leaf clovers, how hard you work determines luck
You get more slavin for minimum wage, then homeless findin a buck
I remember my yellow toy dump-truck, I loved it like no other
Untill I realized I only had anything, because of my hard working mother
And my older caring brother, who is more of a parent than a sibling
Was always trying to teach my to rhyme, even when I was only scribbling
Now i find myself nibbling, trying to hold on to those golden years
But how can you think of the past, when your future brings only tears
And many more fears, how can you live when your loved pass away
I only hope they feel the same way, when they throw a boquet on my grave


This is all true...

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come on plz dont sleep on this!

this was a deep piece like t he title said...
There was a pretty good vocab, But in the middle of MeThoDz part seemed his flow dropped, but came back...
Mental God seemed to keep a good flow throughout, and a pretty good vocab...
good piece - deep like u said

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My people skills are way better then yours, nigga..

fuck dont sleep this piece sholdnt be slept on....


up up and away

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yo this is pretty good.. i thought it was deep
Methodz u came with a pretty good verse..
I thought by the title you were going to talk about just turning 15 and your balls droppin
Mental God.. That was the shit.. u got the better of the two verses even though they were both hot.. i liked the imagery throughout..

Good Droppin Guys..
Pz..

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this is good shit man...by the passsion in both of your words, I can tell you are spitting stuff that is own your mind and basically asking us to answer the unsolved questions of your life that you are unable to understand...this is what I feel, truly makes a good emotional song, when you do not turn to an artist such as tupac for inspiration...but you already have everything you need in u...

Great work overall, I love it...espically since I can truly relate to it and understand both of your points of view. Overall, i give this...

8/10...great work both of you.

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this was deep...likin this alot...hhhmmm content was nice so was ur vocab....flow was choppy at points...but thats all I really could say bad bout this verse...in all this was a well done collab

thanks guys

UPPIN

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uppity? nah, just uppin, yo

Yea, i'm new here not sure how to use thi site yet but man I gotta hand it to you, that piece was good real good, deep to, the best comes out when you open up, good job man keep putting out stuff like that your sure to make it, GOod luck

Great Verse man

Krytikal
eXtreme Lyricist

yo man dat wuz tight