me n u
ill spit first
yall kno the rules
first to 5 votes
must explain votes

Yo u getting scared but here theres no escape like Alc-a-traz//
My lines r like knifes stabbin ur ass, killin-u-dead//
There was no chance of u winnin this shit but yet u-still-try//
This is like jumpin in front of a bus, cuz either way u-still-die//
I'll take a second to speak, n Ill keep my weapon in reach//
I ain't talkin romance but you'll get swept off your feet//
I got more riches than you, I fuck more bitches than you//
Only thing I haven’t got is more, stitches than you//
Put your ass in my path and I'm gonna blast it//
Give u just a sample of me n I burn u like battery acid//
This guys life is always in slow motion like the matrix-reloaded//
Now just sit there n stare nigga cuz u just got straight folded//

what this take me like 5 minutes hit it back yo man

You Got Whack Structure And Punches And Whack Weaponary/
Bitch I Am Like A "Deadly Dance Combo" Do Not "Step" To Me/
Im The Illest , So Sick That Medicine And Antibiotics Are Useless/
Your Fake,You Bite So Much Lyrics Your Going Fuckin Toothless/
Thinkin Your Gunna Get Votes Cause It Took You " 5 Minutes "/
Well All Your PRE-WRITTEN Shit Is Getting Fucking Diminished/
Dont Even Try To Battle Back , You Should Just Retreat Bitch/
Cause If Im On Your Fuckin BEEFLIST,Ill Make You MEETLESS/
Belive This , I Aint No MotherFuckin Joke, Your The Hoax/
I " See Through You " Like Your A MotherFuckin "Ghost"/

yo just wanted ta say i didnt pre-writ......................................
tight ass shit mann..................................uppin for votes

Yeah man its All Good I didtn mean It , it Was Part Of Battle


Lets Get Some Votes

Good Luck Man...This Was Sick Battle

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I ain't talkin romance but you'll get swept off your feet//

Bitten off Gangstarr-Mass Appeal or You wanna battle me

Aight just though I'd point that out. Otherwise nice battle boyz.Merry Christmas.
Laydown:
Opening:Tied need a little work but n2bad
Punches:CrookedComical
Personals:CrookedComical
Multis:Petrafy
Metaphors:Tied (none)
Enjoyability:CrookedComical
Structure:Tied both well defined
Flow:CrookedComical
Closing:Tied N2bad
Overall:

Vote:CrookedComical.

I always repay the favour. Nice job bois.

for real shit mann...i never heard of gangster i guess thas dq if u want crook....mah bad yall i mad tha mistake didnt mean it but o well.............................................. .......up 2 u crook

Nah I Wont Have You dqed .. lets just get some honest votes


P.s

Havent upped this in a while cuz ive been banned cuz i shared an Ip block with sumone else who got banned

it sucked

but im back
Peace

ite close shit but c-c gets this for me with better punches nice opener man,
just get sme personals in there but nice spit,

p- work on your punches gota hit harder man ive seen so much better than you.


now put an honest vote on this http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...046#post1030046 plz..............................thx............pz

Alright come on yall for reall we need votes

post ya link ill repay the favour

peace

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crooked criminal had a better structure and punches ayt?

petrafy had good punches and a good structure but cc verse was easier 2 read!!

vote - cc

aight...well, this shit was pretty dope. both had some good punches, but i think that petrafy came stronger and crooked didnt come back strong enough (no hate crooked).

vote: petrafy


please repay the favor....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102139

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101943

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