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Nigga Ima OG.
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My Rap Book
IP: 27B1 49F3
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Sand Ape Methodz The cover distorted and faded wit colors Red paint to keep unwanted others-out My faint rhymes drains the few who've read-it Spoken word has said-it, memorized the book And its bled when i've felt pain, its insane Cause it seems when im sad, and I write it rains In the night im sittin zombie-like, honesty-I-write Never rappin to fake, never rappin hate Just tryin to catch a break, wit a topical Hostile, because I keep it in my pocket were'ever I am The pages filled wit black-inc, never write wack as I think My next line just fills its self in, never about wealth Or about what I wish I had, just about my night in stealth About myself, and its my book of rhymes Threw thick & thin, the ruff and easier times The one thing I can turn to and repent my troubles Flowin to instrumentals, and writin doubles Instead of merkin, I add my rage to the page And write the pen out of ink, blink - and a whole page is filled These are Sacred Scriptures, never hatred-or-fixtures Just my book of rhymes.....
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OG Status My people skills are way better then yours, nigga.. Last edited by Viscosity : 12-26-03 at 02:17 AM. |
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Nigga Ima OG.
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IP: 27B1 49F3
damn uppin this... someone reply
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IP: 19D5 2B5E
simple rhyme scheme but effective noentheless
deep word usage in this shit, u seem like ud be good at english an shit.. nice vocab and kind of abstract emotion, ya dig i liked this drop neway, keep em comin mayne... hit up my thread "when faith grows" peace out |
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Nigga Ima OG.
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IP: 6AF1 6D5A
ight thanks for the reply... upp
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IP: 8A73 246B
Your rap book isn't even worth me wiping my ass with. Ya piece of shit, eat shit. I'll take you out og style. FROM THE BRONX!!!!!!!!
You fucking queerrr Get outta heerrre Before you get stabbed in your earrr Or in the rearrr You fucking clown Get outta town I never liked Jordan and I never will Because he likes to get fucked by some guy named Bill FREESTYLE MIKE WILL TAKE YOU ALL ON!!! The Rapsss |
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Nigga Ima OG.
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IP: 3A79 B1A6
keep ur hate off my nuts bitch... up
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IP: 321C B3FF
I think you needa work on yo rapbook homie fo real............but I would go as fare as sayin I would wipe my ass wit it.
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"The Legion" takes no prisoners! I can be nice but dont make me mad....cause when I loose control.......your dead !! my site:http://freestyleman.proboards25.com/index.cgi |
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IP: 4CFB 9C60
this was aiight a bit short but still aiight..ya Structure and flow Need Work but its not much....Ya Vocab wordplay was worken in this piece Imagery Was Nice.....so all and all nice work man keep elevaten.......Leave feed back on Never take a chance if u can..
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