ok you know the rules.....16 lines..max im not saying the rest but you check in .....................CHECK IN FOR ME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!onc e u check im droping.....

Double check in..
For first verse....

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yo look man.......ok.....

Im droping cuz im about to leave so yeah.......

Im about to drop a bomb and explode it on his head/
Brains gush out and guts squirting out on his bed/

Targeting this bitch as if i was santa clause cuz its me/
This herb is so perfectly wraped up like a gift when he joined on christmas eve/

Like me giving him the middle finger and a smile just for fun/
Me pulling out my ak one....while he pulling out his christmas toy gun/

Oh i dont know about how cool this bitch can flow/
yeah since hes new to rb...his only crew is in the shadows/

And now i know one thing cuz i have nothing on my mind/
Set my flows so bad this bitch be like"i won and i didnt turn my shit on time!"/

But the only good part is that you got a christmas gift/
u know whats inside of it?/coal and your dogs shit/

Hey guess what i got for christmas?!/A bottle of Liquer and some Weed/ Gues what i got you!/A Armed bomb that has 5 seconds left for you to leave!/

enough of the gay jokes lets end this shit now/
Time to bring all my flows to chicago and hunt this bitch down/

'Jesus' ur comic ill repost this battle so u die 3 times..
Smash ya brain wit a 'crucifix' so the thought of loss..
..'crosses' your mind..
Prophet without a word to cast not even a disciple..
Kid is never ahead of me..except in this thread title..
The occurrence of a noob like you was forseen..
So they expanded the postbit to fit ur rhyme scheme..
8 wins only double his losses basicly he's up four...
Thats ur verse..?
Now the crowd has a reason to yell 'We want more'..
Shadows hunt you..your own is vs you he's 'behind'..
Which strikes back to your current..State of mind..
Seperates bars..n useless puncutation to stand out..
Your lines aint 'flowin' like rivers in Africa's drought..
..Man a rap is supposed to rhyme..line after line..
I've made this newbie 'history' lable me 'Father time'..

(14)..

Uppity..
For poll votes..
Ill remember u, n return the favour when i hit 100..heh
............Up:1

yea straight ace took this he just was on......he fed a bit .....but he had some worded punches....and a couple good personals....his flow was also better because he didn't switch structure half way through his rap.........overall i think you underestimated this kid and he in turn....did prettty well vote...ace..no hate one....hit this up if ya want..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101762

This was a cool lil battle here to me the harder hitting punches and better overall verse came from..

My VoTe - Straight Ace..

Here what took it..


Dope..

its really 2 bad i cant vote, even chrit says he hates that rule, anyway, yah ace ripped him, thats all i hafta say except for the 100 things so im just typin this, peace

Tight battle...

Prophet you shouldn't seperate ya lines, it makes the flow weak and the bars connect with each other less....
Some lines were nice, altho some were average at best... a few personals in there which was safe...altho the structure wasn't the best... Good verse overall
Ace came hard... some good personals throughout.
Structure was nice... short sharp bars consistantly hittin...
Some real tight lines and a good finisher, overall a better verse really...
Props to both but...

Vote - Straight Ace

Return the Favour - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101913

Top of the forum..
Uppin 2....
Uppin for poll votes
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If i could vote id definetly vote Ace.......he ripped this shit apart
flow punches wordplay all that was pretty tight

vote: ace

vote on this plz .....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101944

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101744

Appreciate it, favour returned..
Need to reach 100 posts, without freepostin...yes.
Uppin' for Prophet..to up...
-Third Uppin'..

my vote straight ace


aiight, prophett you came hard wit some witty punchlines,

e.g
Like me giving him the middle finger and a smile just for fun/
Me pulling out my ak one....while he pulling out his christmas toy gun/

but like this, and the rest of your verse, it still lacks complexity, to make you punches hit that little biit harder.

an why was you rappin bout christmas so much??



but straight ace, jus took nearly every catergory, his punches were hard hittin, complex an had good wordplay.



'Jesus' ur comic ill repost this battle so u die 3 times..
Smash ya brain wit a 'crucifix' so the thought of loss..
..'crosses' your mind..

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Yeh really i like Straight Aces style. You dont kill your self to read it. Quick stabbing punches . Good work

My vote - ACE