Both good verses all i gotta say to em' is jus keep it up, an elevatin peeps.

pacaso mac
you definatley need to fix the structure, an try to even your lines out a bit more.
you had some nice concepts, but your rap was about guns, this is the net, you have to spit in metaphors really.
your vocab was pretty newbish.

BFK
your wordplay was pertty good, an you never used much really bad vocabulary. you structure still needs a little work though.

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Both good verses all i gotta say to em' is jus keep it up, an elevatin peeps.

pacaso mac
you definatley need to fix the structure, an try to even your lines out a bit more.
you had some nice concepts, but your rap was about guns, this is the net, you have to spit in metaphors really.
your vocab was pretty newbish.

BFK
your wordplay was pertty good, an you never used much really bad vocabulary. you structure still needs a little work though.



my vote BFK
his punches hit harder than pacassos, and his had better wordplay, plus a better structure. so all these elements lead to his verse being better overall.


plz hit this up with a fair vote each when lil tagger has spit
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...554#post1023554

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i can't vote yet, maybe a mod can add my vote but here's my
explanation.,,,pacasso hit with some witty punches, not that ill but he came betta wit'em, nicer flow, disses hit betta also,
bfk was iigh, his punches were kinda soft, disses were ok but did'nt cause an impact, nice battle here but pacasso so just edge
him

vote pacasso

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Hey fellas I cant really vote yet but i'm a still break it down
Over all both verses we'er close
Good Flow , And Good punches
But I'd hafta go with BFK on this one his punches jus seemed more effective an his wordplay was a little bit better
But Pacaso' macs leave shells like i was just {makin an omlet}/
was bomb i really liked it
but my vote is - BFK

Vote - pacasso

your structure most def needs work, but overall I think you had the less filler and a variety of better punchlines and wordplay, so overall Pacasso..

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HOly shit people
Fuckin vote already
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i cant vote yet so ima keep it simple
B.F.K jus edged you out mac well thats my opinion man good verse tho id like ta see a rematch sometime after this.........?
vote:B.F.K