n00b wants it......

10lines
he drops first
i set up
no bullshit
30minutes

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Once again ... another murder since for the KILLA....

AYO~

watch me break you off somthin proper the lyrical doctor
given you a dead female dressed in the prom queens apron//
i'll murder you bitch like the white chicks in the kill bill/
fuckin you over wit white tip dicks~u'll still say a black man did it//
the raz~fuck this fake fag i'll put a bullet in his esphogus/
watch'em clap~with a busted rhyme that he swear that was fired up//
lyrically break nigga's neck when i spray with these text~fuck ya midsection/
squeeze ya whole body to lose ya air compression~ like strained errections//
i'mma me rape this faggot ~ an i won't even ejectulate/
he gotta dickriding ring because all people are shapes//

yeah structure a lil fucked oh well... it was like a 20 min key or somthin like dat .... BLAH

Good Luck...

SON UR FUCKING LATE!...

i hate herb that post late... damn...

you got 5 mins... or i'm callin it off... on3

The Point of Rapping is to Rhyme....

Dogg this ain't the poetry section, nigga rhyme a word
"i'm just a sick newbie" nah son you the definition of herb
Your off balance, outta sync and you admit your structure is fuck
1-1 born in December and you the nigga wishin me goodluck?!
I searched your history, same type of verses, Your raps are cliche
unfinished battles, you can't get a vote, chances are history will repeat today
Hanging off Nuclear Concepts dicks, shit i knew you had to be nuts
for battling me, and he's a virgin, peep his sig, he never been touched
From the land of the warriors, oh i get it, you must be the waterboy
I know you wrote a better verse, common please tell me the first was a decoy

Next...

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Your verse was posted: 12-28-03 at 05:36 PM
Mine was spose to be 30minutes after...
mine was posted: 12-28-03 at 06:04 PM

Do the math Herb...]

and so he don't change it... his sig says "Untouchable" and he said he's from the land of the warriors and he reps nuclear concepts

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shit, killas verse aint even rhyme!

props to raz, good punches, actually rhyme.

vote: all raz

return it - http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101934

Ok...I will give my honest opinion here.
Complete merking by Raz.

MD_killa...you use too many punchlines and every punch in your verse seemed to point towards some sexual aspect...which is highly played out. Also, your lack of personals really affected the strength of your verse here, you must do some research on your opponent...it is a required task of a textcee. Raz, i liked dat opener...that was pretty ill, and you kept it though your whole verse...Good job.

Vote- Raz...complete merking

Return the favour by dropping honest votes on the battles in my signature please. thx.

RAZ YOU FUCKING HERB...

AYO THIS FUCKIN DIM SHYT FUCKIN CHANGED HIS SIG... MY WHOLE VERSE WAS ON HIS SIG... (SAYING PERSONALS)

OH FUCKING WELL... DAMN YOU FUCKIN SUCK DUNNY

"and so he don't change it... his sig says "Untouchable" and he said he's from the land of the warriors and he reps nuclear concepts"

YOU DON'T FUCKING EXPLAIN YO VERSE YOU DIM SHYT!!!

OH HELL FUCKING NAH...

DAMN... OH FUCKING WELL... I DON'T GIVE A SHYT!!!

UPPIN

and now i know why this fag wanted to spit first...

so he could have and hour to check up on shyt bout me

ROTFLMMFAO... GAYNESS TO THE FULLEST... LMFAO... THIS IS MAJOR LAME... GET THE FUCK OUTTA HERE

what you mentioned my sig in that shit???
my aim convo....umm ok i'll put it right here....

Peopleareshapes:How are peoples records so good, they can't be that good
Raz:just come hard
Raz:and have a good dickryding ring

There thats what it said but i want votes so i'm advertizing....
and i explained so you wouldn't mess with it kuz mine disses are noticible.... i didn't catch yours...

Upp number 1

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Punches- raz
vocab- killa
flow- raz
wordplay-raz
creativity- none
complex- none
structure- raz
overall- raz

mdkilla, elevate b4 u take on vets...and quit ur bitching, ok verse

raz, nice verse, enuff to da the job, *props* to both mcs...

EVERYBODY HIT THIS UP!! HONEST VOTES ONLY!!

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe

hit that yall

flow-Raz
metas-MD...
open-RAZ oops
close-RAz
wordplay-MD
punches-RAZ
vocab-md

SUre RAZ had it....WHy the hell ARe you battlin noobs???????

Uppin battles on noobbssss to get b ig records.....hmmm

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe

This was a complete merk job, Raz takes it hands down.

Personals- Raz
structure- Raz
Rhyming (yes, we are making this a category)- Raz
Flow- Raz
Win- Raz

Md Killa, you need to elevate, good luck to you though man.

Vote not counted. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-strobe

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escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

-->FreeBasE<-- I battled him because he answer an open callout...If he is stupid enough to answer then hell let him get merked...

Uppin for votes::::: 3-0 my favor
number 2

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