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Alpha.... ima BEaTyA, cuz you cant compete with me
Im'a knock ya down to 0-3, then drop ya name in my marquee

7/10 nice puunch though marquee was a half rhyme

Your lyrics are behind in times, like the shit put in an attic
And that prolly explains, why your still reppin Stillmatic (his avvy pic)

2/10 .. wtf happened there?

Even when you shit a hundred posts, ya still be 'New To RB'
Your too elementary, Your game just cant stand with me

4/10 ... Falls Asslep*

Your rhymes just dont stick... like watered down glue...
That explains why theres only one other cat in your crew

3/10 PLAYED TO THE FULLEST>>>>>>>>>>!!!!!!!

Yah your reppin Final Flows.... that shit is very true
Cuz this is the last verse.... thatll eva come outta you

4/10 eh could have been better

20/50 = Below Average..


im that type of nigga you talk shit to i blow you up like a beeper//
you damn right STILLMATIC cuz i got heaters to burn you like ether//(nas)
you right its only one nigga i role wit but bitches role through the place//(house)
you keep pics of bitches asses cuz hoes sit on ya face//
you rappin that sweet shit im rappin gangsta and violent//
you cant beet me you keep loosin like you played for the lions//
you aint no dominater nobody neva gon fear ya//
the only thang you dominated in flowin is ya self in the mirror//
youz a fagget yo punch line tickle what the fuck are you gay//
i rip ya eyes out stuff em in yo mouth so you can watch what you say//
niggaz think you whack bitch they wanna hear my flo//
lyrical soldier? nigga you aint no fuckin G.I. Joe

0/50 = Noob

Vote = Dominator

Conclusion: Alpha Did Not Follow The Rules
10lines Max...

K..........
Dominator....
Alpha.... ima BEaTyA, cuz you cant compete with me
Im'a knock ya down to 0-3, then drop ya name in my marquee
^good wordplay /personal 8/10
Your lyrics are behind in times, like the shit put in an attic
And that prolly explains, why your still reppin Stillmatic (his avvy pic)
^ pickin on his avy ok...nb personal there... 6/10

Even when you shit a hundred posts, ya still be 'New To RB'
Your too elementary, Your game just cant stand with me
^this was prolly your weakest line......5/10
Your rhymes just dont stick... like watered down glue...
That explains why theres only one other cat in your crew
^good punch/personal....7/10
Yah your reppin Final Flows.... that shit is very true
Cuz this is the last verse.... thatll eva come outta you
^ good play on words felt it.........8/10
overall........34/50..not your best.....

THE ALPHA....
im that type of nigga you talk shit to i blow you up like a beeper//
you damn right STILLMATIC cuz i got heaters to burn you like ether//(nas)
^hehe no no no no no no fed....bite....whatever 3/10
you right its only one nigga i role wit but bitches role through the place//(house)
you keep pics of bitches asses cuz hoes sit on ya face//
^is that a bad thing i see no diss........2/10...fed again...
you rappin that sweet shit im rappin gangsta and violent//
you cant beet me you keep loosin like you played for the lions//
^prolly your best line the top was a simplistc setup but .......7/10
you aint no dominater nobody neva gon fear ya//
the only thang you dominated in flowin is ya self in the mirror//
^ thats called a missed punch.......3/10
youz a fagget yo punch line tickle what the fuck are you gay//
i rip ya eyes out stuff em in yo mouth so you can watch what you say//
^played i'll give you 5 for that shit...5/10
niggaz think you whack bitch they wanna hear my flo//
lyrical soldier? nigga you aint no fuckin G.I. Joe
^k you played off his crew thats kool 6/10
overall...26/50...

3B50


Alpha.... ima BEaTyA, cuz you cant compete with me
Im'a knock ya down to 0-3, then drop ya name in my marquee
Nice multi's and Overall good opener 8/10 <-Best line

Your lyrics are behind in times, like the shit put in an attic
And that prolly explains, why your still reppin Stillmatic (his avvy pic)
LoL Nice good punch 8/10

Even when you shit a hundred posts, ya still be 'New To RB'
Your too elementary, Your game just cant stand with me
Decent 5/10

Your rhymes just dont stick... like watered down glue...
That explains why theres only one other cat in your crew
Funny and decent personal 6/10

Yah your reppin Final Flows.... that shit is very true
Cuz this is the last verse.... thatll eva come outta you
Ehh... a so-so closer 4/10

Overall: 31/50


im that type of nigga you talk shit to i blow you up like a beeper//
you damn right STILLMATIC cuz i got heaters to burn you like ether//(nas)
Would have been good, except its feeding 0/10

you right its only one nigga i role wit but bitches role through the place//(house)
you keep pics of bitches asses cuz hoes sit on ya face//
Again feeding 0/10

you rappin that sweet shit im rappin gangsta and violent//
you cant beet me you keep loosin like you played for the lions//
Just like newer members sports meta's, its so-so 4/10

you aint no dominater nobody neva gon fear ya//
the only thang you dominated in flowin is ya self in the mirror//
lol its aight... not great and not good, but enough 4/10

youz a fagget yo punch line tickle what the fuck are you gay//
i rip ya eyes out stuff em in yo mouth so you can watch what you say//
Same basic idea from Eminem's "Who Knew"..."Oh - you want me to watch my mouth, how?
Take my fuckin eyeballs out, and turn em around?" 3/10

niggaz think you whack bitch they wanna hear my flo//
lyrical soldier? nigga you aint no fuckin G.I. Joe
Terrible Closer...played. 2/10

Overall: 13/50

Dominator With The Merk

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SOrry but i can't edit...could you all hit up my link in my sig and poll or vote.......

Thankz......

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