10-15 lines
No feeding
No Freeposting
Quick versing meaning you got 30 minutes to write 10 to drop 45 max...
No crew hate d/r votes
45 tops or DQ~

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Merkings will occur Monday thru Friday, 8 am thru 5 pm, C.S.T.
For my convenience, not yours!

Checked in Good luck ...No prewriting .

*He references the Dukes of Hazzard above his avy pic...

We're both from Houston, so I've heard of this kid's skills...
But he ain't known for rappin, just being tha only G on tha pill.
Cuz he's always gettin fucked, ended up growing a womb...
Scared he'll get knocked up, from all tha dick he consumes.
And that's just his personal life, his academics suffer as well...
Kid's dumb, when he wants weed, he checks inta a roach motel.
I can't believe ya name, another punk bitch on Shady's dick...
Disgracing my town with homo acts, only way ya considered sick.
So go on Duke's of Hazzard, with ya rhymes outdated like that...
You ain't an Outlaw, they're wanted, you're not, just face that fact.*

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Merkings will occur Monday thru Friday, 8 am thru 5 pm, C.S.T.
For my convenience, not yours!

Bitch I'm burnin ya...my style gets under your skin jus like a hernia
Plus I've got you shaking in your boots like cowboys with hypothermia
I call you a faggot because you're like a twig, burned to the third degree
you call someone a faggot because you're lookin' in the mirror sayin' "oh wait, that's me"
Kids from my hometown yet none of my niggas heard his name
Stay tha fuck on rapbattles cuz in h-town youll never have fame
Young at heart with a style that's older than that story Huck Finn
When someone says "play off my verse" they don't mean like a jungle gym
The reason you almost didn't battle is that you're not worth the work, it's hard
Hey Born, this isn't the sport of golf, so stop finishing a verse under par
Koed by Ape then emerge you’d thing this could would Prevail
This is the one dude who responds to the penis elargement e-mail!-
Reading his first has made me lose my appetite due to all of its filler
This cat's words aren't a "genuine draft" but are still lighter than Miller

well...nice battle....thank god u took that pic outta ur sig slim....

breakdown-
slim killed it with flow easily while born loaded slim wit personals.The vocab will go to slim easily along with more solid punches. both shared the same structure. I think these two are on a different skill level tho. Apart from personal diss's. Slim runs away with this.

vote SlimThug nice battle pc*1*

break down:

opener-b2k
punches-slim
personals-tie
multis-slim
metas-slim
flow-slim
closer-slim
overall vote-slim

good battle by both cats...

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aiight
born to kill
We're both from Houston, so I've heard of this kid's skills...
But he ain't known for rappin, just being tha only G on tha pill.
6/10

Cuz he's always gettin fucked, ended up growing a womb...
Scared he'll get knocked up, from all tha dick he consumes.
6/10

And that's just his personal life, his academics suffer as well...
Kid's dumb, when he wants weed, he checks inta a roach motel.
7/10

I can't believe ya name, another punk bitch on Shady's dick...
Disgracing my town with homo acts, only way ya considered sick.
7/10

So go on Duke's of Hazzard, with ya rhymes outdated like that...
You ain't an Outlaw, they're wanted, you're not, just face that fact.*
7/10


overall 34/50



slim thug
Bitch I'm burnin ya...my style gets under your skin jus like a hernia
Plus I've got you shaking in your boots like cowboys with hypothermia
7/10

I call you a faggot because you're like a twig, burned to the third degree
you call someone a faggot because you're lookin' in the mirror sayin' "oh wait, that's me"
6/10

Kids from my hometown yet none of my niggas heard his name
Stay tha fuck on rapbattles cuz in h-town youll never have fame
6/10

Young at heart with a style that's older than that story Huck Finn
When someone says "play off my verse" they don't mean like a jungle gym
7/10

The reason you almost didn't battle is that you're not worth the work, it's hard
Hey Born, this isn't the sport of golf, so stop finishing a verse under par
6.5/10

Koed by Ape then emerge you’d thing this could would Prevail
This is the one dude who responds to the penis elargement e-mail!-
ROFL 8/10

Reading his first has made me lose my appetite due to all of its filler
This cat's words aren't a "genuine draft" but are still lighter than Miller
7/10


overall 47/70




winner slim thug
higher percentage

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We're both from Houston, so I've heard of this kid's skills...
But he ain't known for rappin, just being tha only G on tha pill.
alright opener...could of been better....2.5/5

Cuz he's always gettin fucked, ended up growing a womb...
Scared he'll get knocked up, from all tha dick he consumes.
it hit...but it's a highly played out punch...2.5/5

And that's just his personal life, his academics suffer as well...
Kid's dumb, when he wants weed, he checks inta a roach motel.
hehe, that was a funny punch...3.5/5

I can't believe ya name, another punk bitch on Shady's dick...
Disgracing my town with homo acts, only way ya considered sick.
Good punch...witty...3/5

So go on Duke's of Hazzard, with ya rhymes outdated like that...
You ain't an Outlaw, they're wanted, you're not, just face that fact.*
Hehe, u best line all battle...good closer...4/5

Overall: 15.5/25 = 62%




Bitch I'm burnin ya...my style gets under your skin jus like a hernia
Plus I've got you shaking in your boots like cowboys with hypothermia
witty punch...espically since he's from texas...4/5

I call you a faggot because you're like a twig, burned to the third degree
you call someone a faggot because you're lookin' in the mirror sayin' "oh wait, that's me"
Very good punch. Hit hard too...kinda stretched tho...4/5

Kids from my hometown yet none of my niggas heard his name
Stay tha fuck on rapbattles cuz in h-town youll never have fame
its alright...others were better...3/5

Young at heart with a style that's older than that story Huck Finn
When someone says "play off my verse" they don't mean like a jungle gym
it was alright...hit hard...3/5

The reason you almost didn't battle is that you're not worth the work, it's hard
Hey Born, this isn't the sport of golf, so stop finishing a verse under par
kinda witty...nothing special tho...3.5/5

Koed by Ape then emerge you’d thing this could would Prevail
This is the one dude who responds to the penis elargement e-mail!-
lol...dats jokes...played punch brings down score tho...3.5/5

Reading his first has made me lose my appetite due to all of its filler
This cat's words aren't a "genuine draft" but are still lighter than Miller
Best line you dropped all battle lol...4.5/5

Overall: 25.5/35 = 73%


Final Comments:
Slim hit harder...espically his punches...tho some seem stretched,

Vote- Slim Thug

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