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730 0 0%
CarsonJetX2 5 100.00%
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Old 12-29-03, 03:50 PM   #1
The Jett
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730 -v- CarsonJet

IP: 1973 EC9D

normal rules
blind spits....
1 hour max after both check in
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Old 12-29-03, 03:51 PM   #2
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checked......in......10 lines^^^^
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Old 12-29-03, 03:52 PM   #3
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yeah whatever...10 lines............................................. ..........
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Old 12-29-03, 04:28 PM   #4
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he's just wack, he's trash so watch how I make C bleed
as i get rid of a Carson daily, like an MTV
best believe he'll get ripped, when I spit this shit
as Carson tries to get away from 7, w/ Jets N rocket ships
Fuck this bitch, N forget me battlin this scared child
when he's in a battle of his own, w/ his forehead N hairline
stop lyin, this kid would win in a battle of half wits
but this a hairy situation, like Helga's sisters armpits
you're half shit, which means ya not ill at any amount
he's just nothin, N when 7 stacks up wins, see nothin counts

^^i guess that's it....it's kinda blah, but yeah......
 
Old 12-29-03, 04:34 PM   #5
The Jett
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oh no....not a tuff guy check in^^

730...

730? this kids a bitch-He can't even call-out he's jus 3 digits
its like dis kid has no hips-I expose dis pussy wit basic rip's
call it quadrupple lip equipped-i spit an leave him motion-less
un-dressed..the only fukin this kid's involved wit's family night incest
He could take the old spice test and jet still leaves em pores perspired
explosive? this kid aint even wired...he oughta be like his avi....re-tired
sit an admire a loss is inevitable-your win an loss rate is crossed in-separable
kid's style is unacceptable-only wins because his rectum deems cock-plentifull
your hope ta merk?-shit...it's as probable as a Lions play-off berth
thought he came wit net'2-worth but left witta solid taste for earth
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Old 12-29-03, 04:42 PM   #6
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hmm this battle was alright, but carson the jayz line is played, but in the end this battle was nothing special.. carson edged out the other kid.. he had beteter punches, and multis and crap..
vote = carson

hit dis up:
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101949
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102049
 
Old 12-29-03, 04:43 PM   #7
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^^no he had multis............................................ .......
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Old 12-29-03, 04:45 PM   #8
Straight Ace
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730
Ok, not bad, first of i want to compliment you,
On your stucture..most kids have stretched lines..
In here. Now on with your content..
You had some decent, ok lines..some nice..
Wordplay on his alias..though at times overdone..
& that hairline line is mad old..famous concept..
Overall ok

Carson
Structure was a little off at points..
Though your punches, personals made up for it.
Like the 3 digits line..
In general i'd say your line was easy going..
Enough to win this battle for you.
Overall Ok

vote Carson

Click the link to finish this battle vs this newbie..
Only 2 more votes need so click here &..
Return the favour...
 
Old 12-29-03, 04:45 PM   #9
The Jett
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hey vote -swayer......yeh stop....thats what we have voterz for

they can figure it out em selves....pc*1*
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Old 12-29-03, 04:55 PM   #10
MyNd. FuLL
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ok
heres the breakdown
730 i am impressed...had good structure and a decent flow.
but the carson daily punch is played to the max..
i know u have know way of knowing cus u're new..
but i have to take off originality points for that..overall
it was ok but the punches didnt really hit hard...


carson...
nice flow and structure... a few nice punches
i would have worded some of your shit a little better in some areas but...they hit enough to get the win..

oevrall
not a bad battle i have seen worse but i have seen better
specially from carson..but carson gets my vote for creativity and consistency..

no hate at all..just honest vote

poll vote=carson

hit this shit up guys..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102062
 
Old 12-29-03, 05:15 PM   #11
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Opener: Tie..
Punches: CJ
Personals: CJ's hit harder
Flow: Tie
Structure: Tie
Vocab: Tie
Closer: 730

730 didnt come to hard and neither did CJ but CJ takes this ~
 
Old 12-29-03, 05:30 PM   #12
lil' tagger
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Opener: 730...dat MTV shyt killed mee
Punches: CJ..he came out better....had more personals and better lines
Personals: CJ
Flow: CJ..i liked hiz rhythm...
Structure: same...both of u wz a lil' off..
Vocab: CJ...had bigger werdz.....lol
Closer: 730..hiz shyt waz funnier.......
vote: CJ....he had more punches......no hate.....*~1~*
 
Old 12-29-03, 05:41 PM   #13
Petrafy
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Tha breakdown
Alright i liked both of these shits but on tha real.
Carson had nice wordplay multies flow nice structure basically had everything.

730 had a nice opener and closer but he forgot to do tha rest of the shit. No hate tho.

My vote-Carson just everythang was tight
I took mah time now redo tha favor
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...134#post1027134
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