I've never really ever at all listened to any of your other stuff, so this flow is a door opener of sorts for me.

My opinion...That "yeah, yeah" stuff at first was just plain silly. As for the rapping, it was tight. It's some really hardcorefully fast rhyming scheiße. But it doesn't mix well with the instrumentals, because you yourself are going a mile a minute, but the melody of the instrumentals are soooo slow moving. It doesn't work.

(Even though it's literally been years since I've heard it, this peice of yours reminds me of the song Forget about Dre.)

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Originally posted by Bruklor Nec is just dumb

I'm taking that as a compliment.

lol... i'm lovin' this tracks.. hook is kinda not as good... lyrically n-way.. verses have sum nice ass lines... second hook is better... musta been how u flow'd the first 1 i didn't like,.... my fav line in this is "never stay'd in skool so i ain't smart 'nuff ta be scar'd-a you"... shit was funny.. yo, good shit post... KNOCKOUTZ Mu-FucKa

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take this shotgun and shove it up ya ass

who gave this bitch a mic???

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^^^homo
but anywayz the delivery was decent
the beat was fire and i want it
lyrics were tight and so was your flow
u kinda slurred on some of ur words but itz all good
overall good track
8.6/10

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.TCS.

ye....feelin that quick flow. lyrics were coo. quality was nice, that ur new equip? beat was hot, i see the style u like now. (i'll get back at u on that) neways, lookin forward to a complete track.

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