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What... "Pen' Period "Skills" conducting movements resistance is a interference cut vital components then catatonic schizophrenia disables oppositions my inhibition ditects false compositions your only wishin try to battle real competition steppin up to me I destroy your intermission you on secondary structures I'm on the primaries composition rhymes vary leave you imaginary my extrasensory perception motivating adaptations of complications polarization and pesky hallucinations then rhyme upon time mechanoreceptors react on a drop of dime to which we climb paradoxical interventions are used upon wach M.C's persuasions of no grasping the mic is my utility you feelin me my rhymes alone conducts a symphony kinetic energy I receive through mental frequency
(chorus) mad esentric lyrics are electric the accolade of hiphop styles are pefected what we lives for hip hip hip hip hop what we die for hip hip hip hop hip hop Penskills enlihghts the population faceting the greatest transformation Penskills enlights the population uh! true United we are the domination Last edited by Penskills : 12-31-03 at 12:01 PM. |
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replied to-Feeble minded
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this was an ok piece.
good: vocabulary was excellent. . bad: flow was really hard to catch. . you should switch your style so that its like this: xxxxxx yyyyyy bbbbb hhhhhh kkkkkkk // hhhhhh dddd wwww rrrrrr ttttt yyyyy // |
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..^ thanks for the advice..I was in a hurry and it came out like that..
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yeah, your vocab was iight, but never type it in like that. it makes it hard to read. you have some really good wordplay though. took me a while to get through it because of the structure. keep up.
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