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Old 12-31-03, 12:57 PM   #1
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MY Lifestyle is similar to those who boast/sit around a table and toast/go to dinner parties and roast just bullshitting I ain't no bushy nigga I'am the type who don't hestiate to pull the trigger type to sit on the block and stack them figures my goal in this game is to have over six figures and if I can't make it rappin' I might as well serve these fiends it's the only way for a nigga with no goals or dreams plot to kick in spots and set up shop never gave a fuck about the law so fuck the cops and fuck the world cause this world ain't did shit for me I ain't got a pot to piss in or a window to throw it out so what makes you think I won't run in yo house tie up yo spouse demand you give me money out the couch I'am sort of a grouch but I ain't the type to pout so don't feel sorry for me I don't need your sympathy all I need is your money and your jewelry so give it up.
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Old 12-31-03, 01:01 PM   #2
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The good - These is a mediocre writing.... It rhymed in places.....

The bad - Try to organize ur bars one by one. Ur current writing is jumbled up...... By seperating ur bars, ppl can read ur verses alot easier...

3.8/10.... Keep elevating dogg....
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Old 12-31-03, 02:04 PM   #3
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You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of people you left feedback to or this will get closed, Thanks.
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