http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...308#post1035308
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...317#post1035317
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...325#post1035325


Inspiration attaches to words to leave time lost and frozen
a troubled path faces me in this web of that we have woven//I stand with my soul in my clothing owing nothing to nobody, refusing to conform with the rest of the silly putty// These waters stay muddy, the future seems to dim// I'm not asking to walk down the street and hear "dude I know that's him//I sing my hymns pray to my gods and dream for glory, escaping from the nightmare that has me trapped within this story// another boring morning as the masses make their way, through the revolving doors of nowhere as they complete another day// You cant say a word to me, I speak in a tongue of terror, as your strive for flare I bring you back to earth as the truth barer// look into the mirror, look at what you're doing, I see a child on life support with plans for pulling// through another night, this fright has him tossed to run straight into the light// This is not my night there's only so much one man can do, i'm not a prophet I wasn't sent to rescue you// I'm just blue battling black as it attacks, locking myself in my room till perfection makes up with tracks// Till the slack is picked up and put away forever, and my brain becomes clever enough to escape from this endeavor// I may never find my way to escape from the darkest day, but at least I can say I dealt with shit my own way and got paid through my soul rather then mix in with the greed, id sell my soul to the devil if he could bare to watch me bleed.




there ya go

hate all u want
i did this in 5 minutes while waiting for my ride
why dont you go a head and sleep on too!
or write
"yo that was coo"
or
"elevate man"
whatever
fuck

upin
come on

wack techically.... i liked how you used metas without explanations though.... neway after seeing your comments to other people i was expecting skillz... this didn't impress.... & that staying poor just so you can get "credibility" is just dumb shit.... whose needs people's acceptance.... what's matters is when you get rich, being rich doesn't change you & that's being real

this is dribble
ill post some of the new stuff when i get back to school
your honest though
it is shit
thanks for posting

Errr this is the 3rd peice in a row.. im not really feeling this peice at all you lacked the multies you had bad vocab and bad wordplay not a really good peice.. sorry

Peace