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yo check it,
Now I don't care bout how many wins or losses this bitch has,
Cause he's gona be 10-3 after Im finished battlin his ass,
he luvs his rhymes, shit he jus drops for tha hell of it,
he proly aint even a dude more like a 300 pound missy elliote,
Im battlin this fag to get respect which is a probroble cause,
and to show he has no courage like the lion in tha wizard of oz,
what tha fuck wuz this cat thinkin when he chose to join tha crew,
He can't hold tha name up it's obvious that this nigga is through,
Next time we meet make sure u do underestimate me homie,
You seen me battle once but you really don't even know me

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trivia101

Feelin'quite father-some wit my eight plus one(9 millimeter)
Trivia101? dawg i could abort an still ur sonn'd
Illunatic sent u defeat.u must not feel complete
Git take a seat.beef wit me's like canadian meat(mad-cow disease)
Retreat-fall bak your like a Big' wit out the Mac
This kid's just wak. so toast I turned him black
I don't even wanna proceed I got to much a lead
Fuck milk get weed-but u still aint gotta victory(his avatar)
I aint even comin hard an still he'd scar'd
Could drop 4 bar's less-an still merk this retard

trivia 101
Now I don't care bout how many wins or losses this bitch has,
Cause he's gona be 10-3 after Im finished battlin his ass,
5/10

he luvs his rhymes, shit he jus drops for tha hell of it,
he proly aint even a dude more like a 300 pound missy elliote,
4/10

Im battlin this fag to get respect which is a probroble cause,
and to show he has no courage like the lion in tha wizard of oz,
6/10

what tha fuck wuz this cat thinkin when he chose to join tha crew,
He can't hold tha name up it's obvious that this nigga is through,
4/10

Next time we meet make sure u do underestimate me homie,
You seen me battle once but you really don't even know me
5/10



overall 23/50


carsonjetx2
Feelin'quite father-some wit my eight plus one(9 millimeter)
Trivia101? dawg i could abort an still ur sonn'd
6/10

Illunatic sent u defeat.u must not feel complete
Git take a seat.beef wit me's like canadian meat(mad-cow disease)
6/10

Retreat-fall bak your like a Big' wit out the Mac
This kid's just wak. so toast I turned him black
6/10

I don't even wanna proceed I got to much a lead
Fuck milk get weed-but u still aint gotta victory(his avatar)
7/10

I aint even comin hard an still he'd scar'd
Could drop 4 bar's less-an still merk this retard
5/10

overall 30/50


my vote carsonjetx2




plz drop an honest vote on the battles in my sig

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not a BAD battle..both had good flow
BREAKDOWN--
punches-Cars..less played..i like the sonn'd one
flow-both
structure-more or less both
sustainment-Cars
enjoyment-both
origanality-cars
vote-cars..
Concentrate on less fillers Trivia


PLZ HIT THIS UP..I TOOK TIME ON THIS PZ
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102236

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ha ha 2-0 UPPIN(1) I ain't even try on this hoe.....
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you can tell..
but thats wot i do..
and wen peeps see the verse they say
"dayum..you cant come hard"..n thats annoyin
but it also makes you an underdog

ANYWAYS HIT THAT LINK ABOVE THAT I LEFT..
MA BATTLES GETTIN MAD SLEPT ON PZ

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Cason gets my vote. He had harder personals, punches, and a better flow. trivia had some whack ass liones....like the wizard of oz shit? Carson didn't really come hard but it was definitly enough to beat trivia. Trivia needs some harder punches and better style. Please hit this up honestly guys. http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102817

I dont mind hittin up votes honestly...but if ur gonna vote poll...
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fuck these nigga's let's get some honest votes, Yall fags act like I had my best flowin skill on this pussy

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Flow-Tie
Personals-Carson
Vocab-Neither
Wordplay-Carson
Punches-Carson

Vote-CarsonJetX2

Trivia....
Ya punches need to evolve more
They dont hit as hard as they should
Personals would be a good use too

Carsonjet....
Ya shit was good overall
Even tho you half assed
It was still pretty dope....

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