i liked this piece......good story.....vocab was ehh.....strucutre good.....metas nice....rhyme sheme nice.....good drop
keep werkin....

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Pretty Good Drop Man. . Definately Funny N You Kept My Attention, Despite A Lacking Flow And Kinda Fucked Up Structure, Till The End. Shit Was Funny Bout The Paper Cut All Up In The Asshole. . Thas Gotta Hurt. Flow Was Lackin' Tho, I Don't Judge Pieces Based On Vocab. . It's All About Content N Flow With Me. . So This Piece Was A Lil Above Average. . Keep Um Droppin.

- Return The Favor On {A Glimpse} When It's Up Aiight -

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U told the story well and kept me intrested in it . the flow was good and ure right u dont really need crazy vocab whn u just spittin bout somethin like this thas funny and whacky.......and this was funny no doubt!!!!
lol keep flowin

didnt like it....sorry.....

lol np...ders always gotta be sumbody who doesn't like what wat u drop...thx for the honest feedback tho. LoL, im guessin u never screwed up a date before?

where do you get these ideas PaYce? you are one crazy mo fo fa sho! God, i wish i knew you in person, you sound like this Kid i know whose always crackin jokes...Ghod...good drop once again, keep em coming and make my day!

lmao, i would tell ya...but then i'd have to kill u...