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LP just came out like a bull in this one but it was close

hey thanx dog. if u have a link to one of ur battles i will vote on it. and could u vote on my battle with GaZeeBo as well?

aight guys. i think this is my third time uppin this battle. someone vote on this and drop a link. ill vote on urs.

aight guys. stop fucking sleeping on this battle. this is the 4th uppin for me. now start sending votes.

i wanna vote for lil fresh.........i think he had some more original style and hits...............both did ok job...i think that you guys could have tried harder.......not hating just voicin my honest opinion............good luck to the both of you
vote = lil fresh
peace

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[The Buddah just sits and smiles]

aight. thanx ferris. well, im up 2-0 because b.b. had to double-post. but this battle is still uppin for votes

damnit people. stop fucking sleeping. post some votes and ill return the favor by posting on ur battles.

rapper_bigga got it to me
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rapper_bigga got it to me
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verse by lp



Have yah cut like "Blade Sales Graphs" my 'Knife-Is-Charting'!! I assault till yah life-is-parting /
an have disaster strike, when i leave "'Bru' Out Fast"(brew) like an 'open bar' at an *Irish Party*!! //

good opener


Yah "Accepting The Bad" like *Agreeing-With-Crimes*!! havin this chump fleein-these-rhymes /
Kid yah wack, watch as my force leaves "'Brutal' Out In The Open" like the |Guillotine Times|!! //

lol...good pounch wordplay and meta

Blows "Fold Yah Into Dictionarys" and have yah *Comming To Terms*!! my smarts-are-triggered /
yuh losin hope, my punches leave this kid |Down In The Dumps| like a fuckin |Garbage Picker|!! //

lol...good stronge ounchs and metas

I have yah "Quick To Look For Breaks" like |Eager Surfers|!! yah wack, this kids-a-newbie /
son yah cant touch my creativity, so phresh'll leave "Brutal Out Of Site" like *Disney Movies*!! //

aight verse pounch

Got him "Surrounded By Pressure" like *Ocean Divers*!! leave yuh shunned-and-bothered /
yuh cant survive this son, cause im constantly "Dismissing Yuh Dreams" like |Grumpy Fathers|!! //

lol...wordplay pounchs and metas

Im sorry but you "Suck Too Much To Be Positive" like 'AIDS TESTS'!! got yah beat, ill bet-money /
go home. yah no threat-dunny, cause phresh simply "Has B Stuck"(bee) like |Fresh Honey|!! //*


lol....good closer nice dropp shorten your lines though
stronge verse

pounchs
wordplay
metas
opener
closer

Biggas verse

o lil phresh, your battling with best
I advise you pack a vest//

blah weak

In this game theirs no room for faggits
so why are you parading around with one of ya vibrating dildo gadgits
you got a maggit, to make it big you grab it and drag it//

meh weak pounch played out

Your puches are like a man with no arms throwing a hook
I think battling you I'm in luck, cause you suck//

nuthing yet

I'm gonna do to you what whitneys husband done to her
except I'm gonna murder yer, I'm in luck cause no one has ever heard of yer//

boring


In papers the next morning it reads fat boy killed and we have no leads//

lil phresh you don't wanna battle me your fucked
your to fat to rap what the fuck your even shuck//

shuck worst then louise woodward did to the baby
when your dead I'm gonna be like romeo ' ITS ALL GRAVY '

When EM said lets -get down to BUISNESS
He didn't mean grab ya dick and kiss this

I think my rhymes have done the buisness,
My lyrics have done the killin', WHILE YOUR DICK IN MENS MOUTHS HAS DONE THE FLLIN'

yo this was weak nuthing really stood out in this verse

---------vote LP------------

vot on my battle in sig

no hate jus a n honest vote

peace

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i wish ur vote would count, but it doesnt. please make sure ur votes can count. i really need this battle to get over with.

dis battle was a bit weak....bigga a no u can do better man but on this 1 ma vote goes 2 lil phresh had the better wordplay and punches....the only downside 2 this 1 was that phresh had a wack structure and it needs 2 b sorted....bigga ur structure is aight....bigga keep tryin and u will elevate but ma vote goes 2 lil phresh dis time............

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lil phresh got this he had better flow and vocab and he also decent wordplay..bigga ur verse was ok u juss need to have a
better vocab selection and hard hitting punches...


VOTE:Lil phresh


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