10 lines

check in

30 min blind spit

set it off.......

this is my check in.........

im not postn till he checks in

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Man fuck X...
...without drugs I'll leave this kid fucked up and pissed
Its sad...
when Lyrical Soldiers produced more talent than ya win list
Excuses are endless... trying to explain why the fuck you fell off...
All good things come to an end... No wonder ya old and soft...
Faggot lost... has no chance... turned wack... you cant refut it...
Musta battled ya self... left the little talent you had x-ecuted...
How ya do it? Battle nothin but herbs and still lose thirty-five...
And the slim chance of you winnin dissapeared when Mr Hope died
This kids fried... Best just create an alias and start again...
Fuck I'll even help you by taking ya avvy... and pulling the pin

Its already been your 30 minutes.
Where the fuck are you?

Dont even tell me I just wasted a verse on a no-showing bitch.

Jesus.... you even changed your fucking sig.

What a bitch.

His sig used to say something about kids X-Ecuted.
Then had his entire win list

Im shittin wins, You just a dead mess, No heart in ya left breast
Left with a dent chest, Kid u cant raise the bar like Mini-Me on a bench press
Leave you with less stress, rip the brain of twurp dudes, Watch P serve you
Dead in the line, only time you ahead of ya time is being out past ya curfew
Rip this kid duck from the peice man...I got snubs tucked to kill men
u a herb, Only time this boy lays down the law is when he fucks a policeman
test ma nerves, like reverse mirror reflections of ur verse mines hot
talkn like a bitch, watch me come in first like a handicap's parkin spot
it's quite hard in fact... lowering my standards to handle this geek
wannabe thug... you couldn't bust a cap if you tripped and shattered ya knee

sry i went out ma fault..........i posted...............ne way...........lets get the votes in.............1

line 3 says p refering my my 1st name...paul but yall didnt kno that do just tellin ya................................

Nice job at either biting or having a ful prewrite...

No personals at all....

And then you edit your sig to try to fuck up my personals.
You are pathetic

wow.....u have a nice record..but i think u may get a loss

i feel X had the better punches and altho u say he had no personals...urs well kinda played like "he only battles newbs" line

i liked from ur verse

Man fuck X...
...without drugs I'll leave this kid fucked up and pissed
Its sad...
when Lyrical Soldiers produced more talent than ya win list

just coz i find it funny u dist that crew

x took it with his solid witty stronger verse but i liked mainly

Leave you with less stress, rip the brain of twurp dudes, Watch P serve you
Dead in the line, only time you ahead of ya time is being out past ya curfew
Rip this kid duck from the peice man...I got snubs tucked to kill men
u a herb, Only time this boy lays down the law is when he fucks a policeman

^^hahaha

v/X Ecution

Aight my vote goes to trapt wit on this one for better punches and personals.

the breakdown:
opening-trapt
closing-x
multis-trapt
structure-trapt
overall-trapt

rapt took this battle because he came harder and because of the points above^^

no hate just an honest vote
great battle

hit this up both of you its slept on
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...859#post1044859

i took the time on this so please return the favor