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Casket Filla
IP: 24A3 0EF0
I am a guy who fills those caskets
I see them in my sight and drop 'em like targets Pin point precision, i hit them wit bad shit With my 9 mill by my side, Im not afraid to take hits Cos i'll hit them straight back wit some bad ass flows Make the heart beat when it comes and breaks their nose Then paralyses them wit my pitch from high to low Maybe blind them with my lighting blow Finally when your standing still I might have the decency to finally kill What should i do, pop you a pill Watch you froth at the mouth complete my thrill I dont know, how do i decide? Shall i watch you die from cyanide? Do you want me to drown you in an incoming tide Or maybe take you for a heart rushing joyride These decisions i have to make to complete your death Take away your final,choking and lifeless breath Watch the finalising rise and fall of your chest Then put you on my tally like all the rest Im not cold hearted, i just do it for the cash I dont really care if you suffer and dont last I consider every target as shit and trash Im not one of those murderers who hits and dash I take my time, make sure the job is done Then when i complete i reload my gun I dont consider my job as a gangsta run All it is, is cash and fun Cos im the casket filla, Red hearted, cash full killa End with evenings with my bitch and filla Full of my shit and then i tella Baby's achin, please make me betta She gets going and of course i let her She does her stuff, i believe its very good I treat her well, just like i should She's the best catered for bitch in this hood My life is like very much a rise A rise to fame in my eyes A lot of people hate and despise But im not bad, i dont tell lies Or cheat on my girl wit a bitch ass ho' I just keep killin, comply wit my roll As a cash killa, collecting my toll And everyone gotta know Cos im the casket filla, Red hearted, cash full killa End with evenings with my bitch and filla Full of my shit and then i tella Baby's achin, please make me betta She gets going and of course i let her Some say i should finish and quit Settle down and stop this murderin shit But i enjoy it, i like the money and thats it But can i offer and give you a tip Leave your views to yourself I wont even look at you even if you top shelf I hope you die of disease and bad health Or shall i kill ya' usin secrecy or stealth There are some people i kill for hate And for you my son, i have decided your fate Im gonna kill you, even without a pay rate Your destiny is decided, im sorry but its too late This time its not because of my occupation Its basically cos of my anger and aggrevation I really hate your moms and dads creation I would love to spit on you when you set for cremation You deserve to die, cos of your temptation Tryin to steal my wife, those pathetic accusations Cos im the casket filla, Red hearted, cash full killa End with evenings with my bitch and filla Full of my shit and then i tella Baby's achin, please make me betta She gets going and of course i let her See ya later http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101857 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101137 http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101436
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Free Agent
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IP: 4C2C 8E82
Flow is a little off in this writing.... The vocab is also limited cuz millions of people drop this type of writing per year.... U really need to try to put some nice wordplay in this writing.... I think wordplay will make all the difference in this piece... Dont worry about multi usage, because I think multies might mess up the flow in this piece....
Also, it seems like U were just rhyming words... U gotta work on tryna use some of the elements that CHRIST (98-6 record) posted.....
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IP: DD10 0DFF
You didnt leave feedback on the links you left....Closed.
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