Ya Ain't Ready

ya spit first
mininum lines 10
no group votes
u know rules
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Blind spits... we both drop in 30 mins... from now....
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Harlems Finest
Please more like harlems royal hiness
please don't try dis ur mind is wat my rhymes is gonna intrigue
why u battlin me u ain't in my league
u don't deserve a mike
u tina i'm Ike
u bouta get da beaten of ur life
ur rappin carreer is gonna be dead
ur rhymes is probably from someone elses notebook u read
got ur girl in my bed givin it to her raw
suckin on my dick like it was a straw
u beat me naw cause it's easy to see
the only major Mc is, me
i wouldn't take ur C.D for free
cause u see
u gettin pissed on by R Kelly
like u was tree
an a tree probably battle betta
throw u away like an old swetta
ya in da trash
if u try and make rappin ur carreer yull make no cash

let's do dis
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Man...

This is the second time I've faced a dyslexic emcee..
Just Pm'd me askin - 'Is we battling... well... is we?'..
Lol.. I sense already that ya avy's a perfect likeness..
Peep's bite lyrics.. not fvcking ankles like this tyke does..
Ya shit brings a whole new meaning to 'nursery rhymes'..
Sh.it ain't dropped from notebooks - they're colourin' book lines..
Punches seen ten times, played concepts without a flow..
You could at least spit a challenge.. You had 30 mins bro!!
Ya record speaks for itself, and by the looks of it you too...
You're rhymes are plain unwanted kid.. 'n 'Rugrats' ain't a crew...

punches- harlem-more to the point-more harsh
flow- harlem-another was choppy an confusin
multi's- none
meti4's- harlem-he possesd some....they were ok
personals- none
overall- harlem-he just brought more to the table here....

honest vote here please
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...x2&pagenumber=1

hl took this shit so fuckin easily.
his punches actually hit...he had a nice flow..good structure..and just merked this niggaz ass..
anotherlevel...check out WEC..

vote-hl

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Uppin x1... tryna get this shit done 'n dusted quickly........................................... .............................................

Harlem had a good drop and really stuck it to the other cat.
He came out with good punches and finished strong.

Another level needs to work onhis structure along with countless other things. He lacked in every department.

Good Battle boys, Harlem gets the win.

Both of you..............
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103895

open: Harlem's Finest
close: Harlem's Finest
personals: Harlem's Finest
metas: ????
punches: Harlem's Finest
multis: ????

Vote - Harlem's finest had the better verse...The other guy needs to work on the his deliverance....

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Mystic (Traitor)

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Another Level, Your structure was pretty poor & that messed up your flow quite a bit. Your punches were ok, but far from special. Simple rhyme scheme, no personal, no metas. You should watch some vets..... see how they spit..... it will help you to elevate.


Harlem's Finest, You did what you needed to win this battle with ease. You had the harder hittin punches, and a good flow. No personals, no metas & simple rhyme scheme, but you still got this without a problem.


Vote: Harlem's Finest for an all-round better spit.