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Come’s from the North, the East, the South and the West
The untameable power, strength without needing a rest
It manifests, gyrates n creates destruction in its wake
At it’s best it’s detest! its chased, adrenalin, n others quake
It jus spontaneously takes, no motive or alibi attempted
Soaring power with its own directive and never contented
-To jus stop and go away, only delays that are implemented
Relays of damage that simply can’t be helped with,
It can’t be stopped! we sit defenceless, only partially protected
Anger of the planet, blowing to show it wont be infected

Its expansive size and resistance regularly strikes back
Shifting plates with cataclysmic catastrophes levelling flat
Some in tact, as the core relieves its inflicted indigestion
Will it return again isn’t a question! it’s a random progression
Striking without warning, like a burst of aggression
The Appalling consequences, of an ongoing lesson
Shaping the planet, manipulation with the weather caressing
Evolution in progress cant be stopped by modern inventions
Eruptive intentions, n pure heat cascading smothering its surface
Reclaiming earth and shows its rage and purpose

The juice of life, its ironic, cause it takes it in a second
Submerging houses, without a struggle, only slowed n lessened
Torrents rising unthreatened by anything that’s living
Ocean swallowing, digesting, foam churning on a mission
Crushing brute, more extreme than fiction, damping land
It can lash down causing electric strikes from its hand
Cutting, slicing and dicing, rising water will regularly strand
Without demand, Filling lungs, lives flash before eyes, it always runs
Jus one rule applies, that’s down it comes, and with vengeance
Rinsing endless, its might, tremendous, to us horrendous
Not to be reckoned with cos ya never well defended!

The pain it can cause is unimaginable, yet tangible
Takes the skin off ya bones and comes from any angle
Can blister and mangle, feeding from the oxygen, drawing stronger
Incineration, forest fire, 1st degree, I could make the list longer
It doesn’t ponder it combusts, once gripped it quickly erupts
And its fumes concuss, in extremes the glow can be seen for miles
Can be Reviled, but its required, complied for food and heat
Through past trials, now rarely used, but we do compete
Let it greet its opposite element, technology available by our feet
Compared to it, irrelevant, cos our armada is to short on the fleet!

Earthquakes, eruptions, fire, floods, tornados, The Elemental weapon
Combined they equate to the Final Chapter of Life…Armageddon!…

Someone Respond.....lazy fucka's.....lol....

This was pretty good drop here man....enjoyed the read.....your structure in this was pretty nice through out it.....the flow in this was good through out the piece, it stayed on pretty well, never really fell off....i liked the concept....Your vocab in this was good like all of your pieces you write lol....but overall this good....keep at it.

yeah man agreed totaly^^ wicked concept, just basicaly loved it, flow vocab stucture was all hee...sick..enjoyed the last verse out of em all but they were all petty nice!!

props

that was pretty good like a 6 out of ten you flowed all the way through unlike some other cats ...

thnx ppl, appreciate the comments....pZ....ill hit yours up...laterz

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Wow... gonna take me fucking ages to get thru these.....

good drop..decent vocab....flow a bit choppy...keep droppin..

this was a very decent drop, flowed nicely, your vocabulary is really nice, and it originality is good too. Good structure and good concept. only thing is maybe use some more multi's, but those dont really matter so decent drop bro.
Pz.

If you guys could hit up my battle which is bein slept on, thatd be appreciated.. thanks.

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